ext_925 ([identity profile] grey-bard.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] icarus 2005-01-09 04:57 am (UTC)

I like that, instead of the typical way such a story would go...

Daniel: "Ha! I knew it! You're gay! Sleep with me!"
Jack: "Go away."

... this one has the interesting and believable premise that the conversation stalls out at "You're gay!", and Jack, far from avoiding amorous advances by Daniel, instead feels the need to do covert homophobia tests to make sure that business as usual is possible.

Fascinating and has me on the edge of my seat.

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