ext_90443 ([identity profile] selkielass.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] icarus 2005-10-31 03:05 pm (UTC)

"It's not because I don't trust you, Weasley. It's that you don't deserve to be trusted."

Ohhh, very well put. Also very effective is the bit about the strange form of honesty- very apt.

I appreciate also the way you lay out all the obstacles and difficulties, but offer hope, and a hint of coming harmony (of sorts) with the final exchange.

Bravo!
Please keep it up!

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