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Review to a recent story of mine:
The ending's kind of sudden. :( Otherwise, it's very, very pretty.
I agree. I wish you'd left your email so I could say so. I haven't posted this story in a lot of places yet because it doesn't feel quite finished. The ending is just not there. I'm rethinking![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
gray_bard's suggested additions. I don't want to add any scenes, they won't fit, but there's something unsatisfying about that ending for me too.
P.S. Sorry for the spamage. I've had to repost entries from earlier today. Backdating issue.
The ending's kind of sudden. :( Otherwise, it's very, very pretty.
I agree. I wish you'd left your email so I could say so. I haven't posted this story in a lot of places yet because it doesn't feel quite finished. The ending is just not there. I'm rethinking
gray_bard's suggested additions. I don't want to add any scenes, they won't fit, but there's something unsatisfying about that ending for me too.P.S. Sorry for the spamage. I've had to repost entries from earlier today. Backdating issue.