ext_2928 ([identity profile] auburnnothenna.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] icarus 2006-11-01 09:28 am (UTC)

Don't know where that came from either, but you should go back for more. No secret I have a fondness for stories like this, for the dark and likely endings that the show itself can't indulge. Bitter chocolate.
I enjoyed the very science fiction feel you gave this with the touches like the metal still hot but not glowing with oxygen.

You really know how to find the chink in a character's armor. Poor John. Command sucks.

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