icarus: (Out Of Bounds 2)
icarusancalion ([personal profile] icarus) wrote2007-08-17 01:31 pm
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SGA FIC: Out Of Bounds - John/Rodney - NC-17

You can get caught up here: Out Of Bounds.

[livejournal.com profile] mad_maudlin, by now you know about the comm dedicated to your bon voyage. I couldn't participate, in too over my head with this story, but here is the last piece of Out Of Bounds that I have on hand. It should bring the story to a nice sense of closure for your farewell.

Good luck in Khazakhstan (I'm sooooo going to brag that I know someone over there). I don't know what you'll be doing when you get back, but everyone I've met in the Peace Corps tells me it's a life-changing experience.

I feel like I should have Ron Weasley moon you now. Instead, I give you gratuitous nudity....

Title: Out Of Bounds
Author: Icarus
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: John/Rodney
Summary: "The paperboy's due by any minute." -- "And you're wearing a turban."
A/N: Thank you to [livejournal.com profile] perfica for playing OOB beta badminton with me, [livejournal.com profile] amothea for listening to me whine, [livejournal.com profile] teaphile for her birds eye view. Our special guest star beta is [livejournal.com profile] sarka with her sparkling knowledge of Czechoslovakian cold war politics. Thank you, [livejournal.com profile] sarka. And, yes, I know there are no 1986 Olympics. ;)

Previously in Out Of Bounds: Known more for his jumps than his artistry, figure skater John Sheppard hired ex-skating champion and 'artiste' Rodney McKay to be his coach. After John's performance at the America Cup (and after), Rodney decides he'd better keep a closer eye on him.


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Out Of Bounds
by Icarus


John's eyelashes flickered and he was dimly aware when Rodney flashed on the overhead light then mumbled, "Sorry, sorry, forgot—"

The light clicked off.

He heard Rodney stumble around in the dark bedroom, making twice as much noise as moments before. Then he tripped. Whatever it was went down with a clatter, and John blinked, realizing that sound was probably his crutches. With a slightly irritated, slightly amused half-smile, John reached for the small side table lamp and turned it on. Rodney crouched on the floor, looking up at him, owl-eyed and apologetic, his foot through the handle of one of the crutches, the other flat on the ground. The clock read 5:12 a.m.

"Oops," Rodney whispered, "um, it seems we need a nightlight."

John decided not to wake up all the way. Instead, he rolled to his side away from the light with a growl of a sigh.

The rest of his sleep hovered on the edge of awareness. The patter of Rodney's feet on the living room carpet. The click, a buzz, and then the faint hum of the television set in the next room turned down low. It sounded like the news. A tiny, sleepy frown furrowed John's brow as he tightened his grip on the pillow. The spurt and spatter of water as the shower started up on the other side of the bedroom wall.

John faded in and out of sleep, hazy and quiet. There was a shift in the air currents that woke him again, a waft of humid moisture as Rodney left the bathroom, a whirring sound turning loud as he opened the door. The overhead fan still running.

John heard a distant clink of dishes. Rodney's next destination was the kitchen. The chug and hiss of the coffeemaker followed by a happy burble. Then the soft, warm smell of coffee began to permeate the house as Rodney returned to the living room, a blue light flickering off the angles of the bedroom walls through the partially open door. John scratched his hand through messy hair and stretched till his elbow touched the headboard.

He rolled over, curious, and watched Rodney sit down at the couch, his head wrapped in a turban of fluffy white towel, another tucked around his waist. The mystery of why they ran through so many towels was solved. Rodney leaned forward and watched the news, carefully sipping his steaming coffee. A half-eaten bagel sat ignored on the coffee table. The blue light caught on his eyelashes, his face open and rather innocent. His expressive mouth pulled to one side over something the anchorman said, bright interested eyes taking it all in with sharp intelligence, and John just watched him.

John gave up on sleep. He swung himself over, only to be surprised by the weight of his cast anchoring him. Right.

Eyes blinking slowly, he debated getting up, then reached for the crutches, sliding the cast off the bed with a light thump as he sat up. He pushed himself off the bed with a hand then braced the crutches, bumping the door all the way open with the rubber-tipped end.

Rodney sat up, the towel slipping over one eye. "Oh. I didn't mean to...."

"Bathroom," John said simply, raising a hand.

John returned moments later, and attempted to focus on the morning news show, trying to fathom the concept of the TV first thing in the morning. He watched the weather report, yawning, as the image of clouds drifted across the great lakes. Partly cloudy. Forty-eight degrees Fahrenheit. Warm day.

John realized he was staring at the TV, slack-jawed--that thing couldn't be healthy. He shook his head and yawned again, rubbing his face with a sniff. He realized Rodney had stopped gazing at the TV and was looking at him. "What?"

"Aren't you... cold or something?" Rodney marveled.

"Huh?" John was a light sleeper, but it didn't mean he was as sharp as a tack right after he woke up.

"Well. If someone had told me a month ago that I'd have a naked man on crutches in my living room...."

"Oh. No," John said. He swung towards the kitchen and balanced, one crutch crushed in his armpit as he clicked on the light.

"That's a picture window," Rodney said.

"So?" John said, his head buried in the fridge. He pulled out cold cuts that didn't smell too off.

"So? The whole neighborhood can see you!"

John peered at the window and squinted. "Looks like the coast is clear to me." Truthfully, he couldn't see anything but his own reflection. He hopped to the kitchen chair, ignoring the crutches. "It's five a.m., Rodney."

"And the paperboy's due by any minute."

"And you're wearing a turban." John pointed at him with a floppy rolled cold cut, then took a bite out of it.

"I fail to see how that's relevant," Rodney said, chin raised, lips pressed together.

"I'm just saying... people with glass picture windows should not—you know what?" John said, an elbow on the kitchen table. "Let me take a rain check on this conversation till after I'm awake."

"You need to learn to drink coffee," Rodney said, standing with a smirk and taking a long sip. The towel made a thick mound around his waist and gapped above his left thigh.

"Corrupting me already, huh?" John leaned back in the chair, stretching both arms over his head.

"Oh, I certainly hope so." Rodney's smirk turned into a salacious smile.

"You wanna cut class today?" John offered.

Rodney looked tempted and hesitated a moment. "Yes," he said emphatically, "but I can't. I have a lesson at six-thirty."

John gave him a funny look. "You'd better hurry up. It's after six."

"It's--? Oh, shit!" Rodney scrambled away, stripping off and flinging both towels on the couch. At a leisurely pace, John got up, and with two swings across the kitchen had the phone in hand, dialing with an amused grin.

Rodney emerged from the bedroom not five minutes later, fully dressed and hopping on one foot as he put on a shoe. He looked up pleading and hopeful to where John had planted shoulder against the wall by the phone. "Could you, um--?"

"Already called."

"I wish you'd let me drive your—"

"No."

Rodney huffed a dramatic sigh. "It would be so much easier, and faster, and in addition it would cost so much—"

"No."

"It's a piece of—!"

"Don't say it, Rodney," John interrupted with a growl. He crossed his arms, half-serious, with a glint in his eye. "You don't get to insult a man's car and then expect favors afterward."

The yellow body of the cab pulled up at the curb outside, its little sign lit up against the deep blue of the morning.

Rodney flung the door open, walked two steps, then spun around to grab his gym bag just inside the entryway, stuffing it under his arm. Halfway down the walk he stumbled as he jogged backward to wave at John, then he yanked the cab door open, gesturing wildly to the driver who appeared to be Indian and in no particular hurry. And hurrying less the more Rodney yelled.

John eyed the clock over the stove. It was 6:20 a.m.

He might make it.

With a swinging step, John swung through the livingroom to the bedroom where he rooted around for a pair of thick fleece pants and wool socks. A sweatshirt and his jacket off the back of the door came next.

He returned to the fridge. They were low on groceries as usual, but there was a half gallon plastic jug of apple cider left. John set that on the counter and extracted a cheap plastic travel mug with a Tim Horton's logo from the clean stack next to the sink. He no longer allowed Rodney to leave dirty dishes in the sink: it attracted ants. Though it was weird having to store dishes in neat piles on the countertop. He filled the travel mug with cider, grabbed the box of cinnamon tea from his own apartment, and dropped in a teabag, then popped on the lid and set the whole thing in the microwave. He leaned back with both elbows on the counter. He found the other half of Rodney's bagel – it was cold, but good enough – and finished that. Then the microwave dinged.

He grabbed the fanny pack he used for bicycling that he kept hung up on the cabinet door handle and strapped that around his waist, then stuck the travel mug in a sleeve that was supposed to carry a water bottle. With a slow, tired swinging hop, he crossed through the kitchen, ignored the still-murmuring TV, and pulled open the front door.

He brushed a few leaves off the seat of a dirty white plastic chair on the porch, then turned around to ease himself into it, the cast sliding on wood, scraping chipped old paint. The plastic was cold through his fleece pants but warmed slowly, while a gentle breeze carried away the mist of John's breath.

John pulled out his mug – it had spattered a bit, but then again, it always did – and took a long sip as he watched cool light slowly paint Rodney's quiet neighborhood.

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[identity profile] celtic-tigress.livejournal.com 2007-08-17 08:42 pm (UTC)(link)
OMG, there's MORE? *boggles* Yay!

...

John has a fanny pack?!? *snorffle*

[identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com 2007-08-17 09:06 pm (UTC)(link)
Yes, this piece had to be separate because it's a completely new phase of the story.

And that's all she wrote. It's all I've got at this point, I've shot my wad.

This is good point in time for people to read all the way through because this could almost have a blank page after it for the start of Book II.

Icarus

[identity profile] feanna.livejournal.com 2007-08-17 10:46 pm (UTC)(link)
Well, this was lovely. (Though I'm personally MUCH more likely to still be awake at 5 a.m.(yes I read that long) than in any shape to get up. I can if I REALLY have to but regularly? Shudders. I suppose I'm lucky that I'm not a figure skater then.)

I'll be looking forward to what comes next (again take all the time you need). I think it'll be interesting to see Johns new program (and costume) and his input to all this.
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[personal profile] wolfshark 2007-08-17 11:34 pm (UTC)(link)
As I get up every morning at five and have to be at work at 6:30? Rodney has my deepest sympathy!

[identity profile] roaringmice.livejournal.com 2007-08-18 01:15 am (UTC)(link)
My skating coach starts many days, on ice and moving, by 6 in the morning. Some nights, she's not done on the ice before 8 at night. She is, in my opinion, a madwoman.

I think it's all part of the job: the early mornings, the late nights, and, yes, the madness. :grins:

[identity profile] twistedrecesses.livejournal.com 2007-08-18 03:33 am (UTC)(link)
They're adorable! :) I'm so glad I started reading this way back when, even though it's outside my primary fandom.

[identity profile] angiepen.livejournal.com 2007-08-18 08:05 am (UTC)(link)
I love that it went right from Rodney going all O_O at John stumping down the stairs to Rodney having moved John into his place. [smirk] John is such a... I don't know, but he's something, LOL!

Angie
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[personal profile] mad_maudlin 2007-08-18 04:11 pm (UTC)(link)
Aw. How did you know domesticity (of a sort) is a kink of mine? Because seriously, these guys are adorable.

(Though seriously, Rodney, a turban? No offense, but you don't have nearly that much hair.)

Thank you for this, Icarus. You're an amazing friend. Lack of naked Weasleys nonwithstanding. ;-)

[identity profile] daemonluna.livejournal.com 2007-08-20 04:01 pm (UTC)(link)
I am loving this AU universe! On top of the John&Rodney love, the behind-the-scenes look at figure skating in enthralling. (Plus, yay for brief moments of domesticity!)

[identity profile] crownglass39.livejournal.com 2007-08-20 04:18 pm (UTC)(link)
But there will be more...eventually...right?

*hugs the story tight*

[identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com 2007-08-27 11:47 pm (UTC)(link)
Yes, absolutely there will be. *crosses fingers, knocks wood, burns incense and all that*

Icarus

[identity profile] starrylizard.livejournal.com 2007-08-25 11:45 am (UTC)(link)
Oooh you're posting OoB again and I didn't even notice. Ha! I shall endevour to catch up as soon as I can. I finally got Vegas to actually accept a few of my Lysacek files so I'm getting somewhere there. Yay! *random hugs*

[identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com 2007-08-25 07:57 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, no way, really? Cool. Thank you. Yeah, I've hit a major turning point (several actually) in the story. Took a breather (okay, I've been a little stuck as to where to go now) and am moving again.

Icarus
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[personal profile] alyndra 2007-08-25 08:39 pm (UTC)(link)
Okay, I just got back from a month-long break from fandom, and reread all of this and the new parts, and wow. This has got to be the WIP -- heck, the fic -- that's most glommed on to my mind now. I love this version of John something fierce.

Are we going to get a line about what Rodney/the audience/judges/other people saw when John was skating, just because he comes across as a somewhat unreliable narrator there?

John hiking up and down flights of stairs and getting caught shouldn't give me toddler!fists of glee, and yet it does. Also the rollerblading was a cross between laughing at him and peeking through fingers at a trainwreck . . . it was just so helplessly inevitable!

Looking forward to more, whenever it comes!

[identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com 2007-08-25 10:59 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you, and welcome back. I have to admit that taking a break from fandom for a month sounds appealing.

John is always an unreliable narrator when it comes to himself. *g*

Thank you so much. I've promised a rough draft of the next scene to my beta by tonight (PST).

Icarus

[identity profile] rabidfan.livejournal.com 2007-08-27 03:50 pm (UTC)(link)
OOOH!!!! MORE!!!!

I've been gone for nearly two weeks...what a wonderful thing to come home to! I'm so in love with this story. It's like a sick addiction, and I hope I don't get cured. I know you're at a point where you're taking a break...I get that...Please! Don't wait too long. I'm needy and fragile...and soon I'll need a fix!

You're a genius, you know that, right??

[identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com 2007-08-27 11:22 pm (UTC)(link)
Sorry I fell behind on the update emails... just, tired.

Thank you, I'm a little stuck at the moment, but hopefully something will shake loose.

Icarus

I love this story

[identity profile] mysticmcknight.livejournal.com 2007-09-10 02:02 am (UTC)(link)
I watched 'Blades of Glory' and wished so despertly that you had written it for then it would have at least been worth the rental, but your story inspired the idea of two male pair skaters...you're story rocks and the film was a let down. I don't know where you going with it, but I do hope you'll not only finish it but have more of John and Rodney skating together...perhaps you could show up that dump film by showing what two male skaters really can do? Eitehr way, please keep up the great work and update soon.

Re: I love this story

[identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com 2007-09-15 10:02 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you. I actually liked Blades of Glory. They knew figure skating very well, and there were all sorts of inside jokes that if you're a skating fan they really nailed. They even borrowed moves from specific programs, mocked the rivalry between Yaguden and Plushenko, Johnny Weir's costumes -- oh, god, I howled. It was pure slapstick and very funny.

But you're right, this is a completely different story. I was relieved to learn that "Blades of Glory" was about two men competing in pairs skating since that's a direction I never intended to take with Out Of Bounds.

Icarus
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[identity profile] spock74.livejournal.com 2007-09-27 01:56 am (UTC)(link)
I just finally got around to reading this, and I am SO kicking myself for waiting this long. Love this. Skating and McShep. Wow. Quite possibly the best premise ever. I really am looking forward to more of this. Thank you for writing it.

[identity profile] sorka42.livejournal.com 2007-10-08 05:38 pm (UTC)(link)
I love this odd and totally out of left field AU. I'm looking forward to the next installment

[identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com 2007-10-08 11:58 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! I'm working on it now. I have two stepping stones of story to bridge. :)

[identity profile] sirkate.livejournal.com 2007-10-13 03:27 pm (UTC)(link)
I still love it. And! John with artistic input! I forsee lots of flying. Mmm, flying.

[identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com 2007-10-19 07:35 am (UTC)(link)
Oh yes. But probably no capes. ;)

[identity profile] sirkate.livejournal.com 2007-10-21 07:57 pm (UTC)(link)
Well, no. If there were a cape, then John would get all caught and fall down, and we already have hurt to go with the comfort. Mmm, hot comfort.

[identity profile] september1967.livejournal.com 2007-12-19 02:57 pm (UTC)(link)
Sorry I haven't commented before but the image of Rodney with a towel on his head is hilarious! :)