Thank you, I'm just blown away. I had to read your comment twice before I could respond.
Every time someone says "my favourite part was..." I always mentally try to fill it in. I've never been right once. When tboy beta'd that scene with the lingerie she told me later that people were looking at her very, very strangely in the cafeteria as she spluttered and choked.
It's so tempting to forever add little bits to the story, but at this point I have to say, "Okay, beta this and it's a wrap." :D
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Date: 2004-11-23 02:05 am (UTC)Every time someone says "my favourite part was..." I always mentally try to fill it in. I've never been right once. When
It's so tempting to forever add little bits to the story, but at this point I have to say, "Okay, beta this and it's a wrap." :D
Thanks again.
Icarus