This is really great. I really like the way you expanded on the idea of Jack and Daniel going to Atlantis, nice bit of angst there. I like the original snippet because it's fun, and I like this one because it's got a nice angsty plot mixed in with the fun. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 2006-01-19 11:48 am (UTC)