Hey You - chapter three
Jul. 24th, 2003 06:00 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
icarusSo I wrote the new part of 'Beg Me For It', 'Hey You' in preparation for 'SNAFU.' I was really happy with it. Gave it to CLS who said:
"This is a great chapter. But - and this is a minor complaint - it doesn't stand on its own as a separate story. Wasn't this supposed to be like 'Sex, Drugs and Death Eater Rock' and stand by itself?"
Wah...! But, but, it came out of its own accord, effortless and lovely. Passionate. Powerful.
And she's *heavy sigh* right. All the major archectural changes she's suggesting just wreck it, I'm certain.
*wails*
"This is a great chapter. But - and this is a minor complaint - it doesn't stand on its own as a separate story. Wasn't this supposed to be like 'Sex, Drugs and Death Eater Rock' and stand by itself?"
Wah...! But, but, it came out of its own accord, effortless and lovely. Passionate. Powerful.
And she's *heavy sigh* right. All the major archectural changes she's suggesting just wreck it, I'm certain.
*wails*
