Would you care for me to add it to the part 1 already up at Happy Hour?
I liked it, the tense interplay between them all not too obvious, with a good comfortable feel between the characters in the end. It's a good resolution to the first part.
What is it that's not feeling right to you? Just one character? You wanted more friction? What?
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Date: 2003-03-04 06:04 am (UTC)I liked it, the tense interplay between them all not too obvious, with a good comfortable feel between the characters in the end. It's a good resolution to the first part.
What is it that's not feeling right to you? Just one character? You wanted more friction? What?