I'm bored with it I guess. There isn't much of a plot, and it lives entirely on an emotional level. The quips here and there aren't enough to keep it alive for me. I think the story moves from A to Zzzzzzzzzzz.
I like the idea of an NC-17 story much better. *grins*
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What feels wrong with it?
Date: 2003-03-04 07:57 am (UTC)I like the idea of an NC-17 story much better. *grins*
Sure, we can Beta it and add it. That's alright.
~Icarus