Speechless! But I will try to feedback coherantly!
Very powerful, I loved how John played out his fantasy conversation with Rodney. I also really enjoyed the syle of the story and how it felt stripped down if that makes sense, the style in which you wrote it refelected perfectly for me how John was feeling.
Beautiful work, and I have always loved that song!
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Date: 2006-11-02 12:35 am (UTC)Very powerful, I loved how John played out his fantasy conversation with Rodney. I also really enjoyed the syle of the story and how it felt stripped down if that makes sense, the style in which you wrote it refelected perfectly for me how John was feeling.
Beautiful work, and I have always loved that song!