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icarusancalion ([personal profile] icarus) wrote2003-09-01 08:28 pm

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Alright, a little more fun with Ron and ???.



Two Men On Top
by Icarus


There was a heavy, wet gasp into Severus' hair as strong, rough hands dug into his shoulders; the inept boy pressed in hard. Panted. "How's that?" Ron grunted in his ear.

"Oh, god…" He could feel the smile in the back of his neck, the faint motion of breath.

"You're so… tight," he whispered. "Haven't been on bottom in a while?" His body, sweaty and so warm was pressed into his back. Damp lips traced loose kisses on the revealed part of the back of his neck, where his hair wasn't stuck fast. Oh, he shivered, he loved that and gave himself over.

"Just haven't --"

"Ungh --" The boy maneuvred in further. Severus gasped.

"-- had sex in a while." A snort of laughter, nervous sputter on the back of his neck, delightful as it was funny. Merlin's bloody arse he shouldn't've admitted that. "Shit. What is it about you that makes me too fucking honest?"

"I'll make an honest man out of you," Ron growled -- so corny -- and nipped at his ears, then rose to his knees, manhandling his hips.

Severus arched back into him, biting his lip. He didn't remember sex being so blatantly physical before. That humid pant in his hair, the skin, so soft, stuck to his back… pulled loose with an almost obscene sound as the young man got up, shifted. Mmmm.

Ron squeezed his hips… his own skin felt so silky under his grip and Ron's hands were meaty and warm. It was his first and last warning before he drove in, harder. He began to rock, to move inside him. Severus knew he cried out, but didn't really hear it. He was thrown forward, too forceful. He caught himself on his elbows. He didn't usually like it hard, did he? Control, he liked.

The next pressed his chin into the pillow. And again. This was a man come to battle and damn it, he had a javelin stuck up his arse, forcing the air out of him, thrust in as far as he could go. Then the pressure released, his cock pulled back, just a little. And it felt soooo good.

"Harder," Severus said through gritted teeth. Ron mouthed delicious obscenities into his back, planting himself firmly for another brutal attack.

"Touch yourself for me." Ron's voice was husky, needy. In any other voice, any other time Severus would have been annoyed at the command. Severus braced himself with one forearm as he complied with a sigh, stroked.

Ron's deliciously warm hand fumbled at his balls; then he rocked forward gently inside Severus, over and over, maddening after such force.

"Hard, dammit."

"Touch yourself."

Oh god. Severus shut his eyes. His hand was frenzied, his chest arched into the pillows as he pressed his arse up to take more of the man inside him. But Ron held his hips fast, kept them to his slow, steady pace. Usually that slow pace was just right, just enough, just what he wanted, but after that hard drive he needed more. He'd been filled more. Sadist. Cruel, clever sadist. When did he ever take the boy as inexperienced?

Then Ron took hold of his hips, squeezed again; Severus panted, hand paused, wondering what was next.

Ron gripped his hips tight, and made a slow, excruciating circle. And then slid in, deeper. Then out, softly. Severus felt every inch of his arse, felt Weasley wring every ounce of delighted enjoyment out of him. He groaned. Oh god, I am being thoroughly screwed…

"Touch yourself," Ron murmured again, his voice a soft keening pant. Good. At least he wasn't in control either. Then he did that circling again, and Severus lost all concentration, mouth open in an exquisite moan.

"I can't."

Then Ron's arm wrapped around his stomach, hard and flat -- Severus was proud of that at his age -- and held him tightly as he did it again, harder this time. And harder. And harder, until Severus wanted to bite something or cry out.

He let loose with a series of invectives that would have given any student of his pause, if they weren't fucking him senseless at the moment. Ron giggled. Giggled, damn him! He swore louder, and really wished he could keep the laugh out of his voice. He had better control than this. Usually.

Ron released him and settled into a steady, strong pulsing motion that felt very easy and natural on him…slightly ragged as a hand slipped, or he got the angle wrong for a moment.

His breath started to catch, a little gasp, a boyish moan as he speeded, jerked slightly off-rhythm. Severus held very still so as not to interrupt -- as Ron came, and sagged panting, onto his back. A faint cool sheen of sweat covered his body; the only time Ron was ever cool was after he'd come.

Severus rolled onto his back and wrapped his arm about the boy's shoulders, tugging loose and then tucking the sheet in closer around him. Ron's chest rose and fell in gasps. He lay bonelessly in his arms; Severus leaned over to kiss him.

Ron said, the words brushing his lips, "You haven't come yet…"

Severus stroked his sweaty red hair. It was so thick. "That can wait." He nuzzled the boy's dewy freckled cheek. His arse was freckled, too; he liked that. "Mature men have more self control…"

Ron stretched languidly down to his toes, arms reaching over his head, and he laughed. His thick thigh slid between Severus' legs and along his rather sticky (and very hard) cock.

"Bullshit. 'Oh, my, oh, oh, fuckmefuckmefuckme…' " he quoted and trailed off into a snicker.

Did he say that? Damn. Severus rolled on top with a growl, pressing himself into Weasley's hip to teach him some manners. Ron only grinned up at him, bleary and tired. He ground a little circle.

"Next time, I'm on top." He had to admit he was far too tired right now. He was a fool to be fucking a sixteen-year-old, though usually they didn't have much stamina.

Weasley leaned up with an impish grin. "But I'm so great on top."

Severus really wished he could argue with that. He feared however that Ron had another quote in his repertoire to back him up. Severus reached over and grabbed a glass of water off the bedside table. Amazing it had survived.

"Yes. You are," he reluctantly admitted, taking a sip. His voice was deepened, muffled in the glass. He swallowed and handed it to Weasley. "But so am I."

"Is this war then?" Ron gulped down the rest of the water. His eyes glittered with challenge and amusement.

"Indeed it is."



Finis.




[identity profile] gmth.livejournal.com 2003-09-01 09:14 pm (UTC)(link)
Niiiiiiiice. Really, really nice. Spicy hot. :-)

[identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com 2003-09-03 07:43 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you! This was fun.

*Shakes head... Ron and Snape...*

Icarus

(Anonymous) 2003-09-01 09:31 pm (UTC)(link)
Naught but one thing to say...Damn!!!!

Bella the Dark

[identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com 2003-09-03 07:42 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you! Ron and Snape? I'm still shaking my head in disbelief.

Icarus

[identity profile] cursive.livejournal.com 2003-09-01 09:41 pm (UTC)(link)
That was hilarious - combative sex, which I more or less can imagine Ron and Snape having, more or less.

Although how the hell did Ron shake the myopic resentment that makes Ron's comic sidekick role so much more layered than many... I'm really curious. He's not generous enough to do any of this, he can't see enough dimensions in people. I believe it when you write it, but there's some suspension involved. I'd love to know what you think when you write Ron this way. Is it what he might be, or what you think he really is the events of canon notwithstanding? When I read your Ron I often think he is Harry dressed up as Ron - or polymorphing Ron really well.

And oh lord this is funny and sexy, and I loved it. Now I really want something from in between.

[identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com 2003-09-01 10:05 pm (UTC)(link)
Great points!

Each of my Rons are different, for different reasons. We'll start with this Ron.

Here we have Ron-away-from-Harry. He and Harry are great friends, but Harry's fame and the perpetual attention he gets chafes some very sore spots for him. Harry brings out some of his best, but also some of his worst. The long and short of it: Ron's not jealous of everyone -- just Harry.

Ron also is stepping out a little on his own adventure here, and he's turned on and gleeful about it all. I see Ron as not having many secrets, but those he has, he's learned to guard carefully because big families are not good at keeping personal secrets.

For him, a secret is like something special, something that's all his own. Sort of like getting his own room.

This is how he is in canon with something new, open-hearted and generous (look at how warm and trusting he is with Harry from the beginning, offering what little he has). The fact that it's sex makes him all the more enthusiastic (look at his *ahem* enthusiasm in GoF). And as I suspect his eagerness to keep Harry's secrets and be in on them, not to mention his secretly practicing to join the Quidditch team, he likes to have his private little world.

Add to that the thrill of it being illicit and slightly naughty, and you have one happy Weasley.

He is generous, almost too much so, until he gets stung. This is a new world to him, so thin-skinned Ron Weasley hasn't been hurt much yet. So all his joy and responsiveness, his loving nature is right there (which comes having such a warm and physical family, the sort of kid who got hugged a lot).

People are very different in the different roles of their life. In bed, Ron Weasley gets to be king of his castle. So it's an area where he's naturally very warm and magnanimous.

Icarus

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[identity profile] goseaward.livejournal.com 2003-09-01 10:03 pm (UTC)(link)
*squeaks*

I do not have words.

[identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com 2003-09-03 07:04 am (UTC)(link)
*is vastly amused* Ron and Snape, happily screwing. Who would've thought? ;) I vowed to do a Ron/Snape after I read Josan's 'Aftermath' (her Ron tears my heart out though).

Icarus

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[identity profile] mark356.livejournal.com 2003-09-02 12:10 am (UTC)(link)
You vile corruptor of youth! Normally, if I see an NC17 ficlet on my flist, I just say, "Oh, that's NC17, I don't need to read it," and skip it. But I am powerless aginst Icarussmut! I must once again commend you on your command of not only the involved anatomy but the involved characters; this is another smoothly written, hot, and funny smutlet!

Which of your stories were nonporn?

[identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com 2003-09-03 07:18 am (UTC)(link)
I am cackling madly. My most heart-felt, earnest goal An encounter between these two has to be raw and very, very physical. There's just no other way.

Fun, isn't it?

Which of my stories are non-porn? Out of thirty? Yeep. How long a list do you want? In general, there's the First Signs of Magic series, you could say Primer to the Dark Arts is non-porn, but that would be, um, overlooking certain scenes. Well -- here (http://home.earthlink.net/~dinkbird/id3.html#PG-13). That'll take you straight to the Gen and PG-13. (Please ignore the state of my site. Earthlink really made a mess of it, and I'm still trying to fix it.) Of course, if you keep scrolling down to the NC-17 section... ;)

I have a promise to write 14 smut stories by the end of the year. Four more to go. *g*

Icarus

AHHHHHHHHHHHHH!

[identity profile] barbana.livejournal.com 2003-09-02 12:26 am (UTC)(link)
MY EYES!

Stop ittttt!

*the sound of my brain melting*

Re: AHHHHHHHHHHHHH!

[identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com 2003-09-03 07:20 am (UTC)(link)
Can you imagine if one of Ron's friends walked in on that?

Speaking of 'my eyes, my eyes!' ;)

Icarus

[identity profile] jeddy83.livejournal.com 2003-09-02 01:10 am (UTC)(link)
Gah, I am in awe of your ability to blend humour and sex, and make me believe unusual pairings.

I do love your Ron and your ability to see beyond his behaviour as a fourteen year old.

[identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com 2003-09-03 07:22 am (UTC)(link)
I feel vindicated in how much more mellow he was in OotP. Though I was a tad disappointed, too.

I never thought Ron/Snape would turn out to be hot to tell you the truth. Once again I'm convinced that the characters do what they want.

Icarus

[identity profile] guntar.livejournal.com 2003-09-02 04:20 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, this is bloody brilliant. Once again, I'm in awe of the hilarity that is your Ron. He's absolutely perfect with Snape; the two play off each other so well that I had to take breaks while reading the fic so that I could breathe.

Snape's POV is really perfect for this, with the way he responds mentally to Ron's excessive humour.

Absolutely fantastic work. *Bows down and pays homage to you*

[identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com 2003-09-03 07:27 am (UTC)(link)
*looks bemusedly at homage*

Ron simply grins, "Hey, I know what I'm good at."

Snape rolls his eyes. "At least there's some use for you." He leers at Ron. "Does this mean you've made your career choice?"

"Yeah, I've decided you're gonna start paying me -- yelp!" *Ron's dragged under the covers.*

"You'll be paid all right. In full."

Icarus

[identity profile] tinderblast.livejournal.com 2003-09-02 04:29 am (UTC)(link)
Lord, is this hot.

Something tells me that we (hopefully) haven't heard the end of this pair ...

-brodie

[identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com 2003-09-03 07:30 am (UTC)(link)
We shall see. I wrote this instead of working on Snape Manor as I was supposed to. I can't wait to send this to CLS though. She might forgive me. ;)

All I have to do is write SNAFU, Snape Manor, the next chapter of Reunion...

Icarus

AAARGH!!!

(Anonymous) 2003-09-02 05:22 am (UTC)(link)
You made me not only like Severus/Ron, but made me start panting for more. I know it's not there- not really - you just make me *wish* it were. Kiss you or kill you? Not sure yet. Oh yes,I think I'll have to kill you because I've decided that I rather like your Ron and *gasp* will now be reading your Ron/Draco, which makes me so very very sad.


Dee

Re: AAARGH!!!

[identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com 2003-09-03 07:33 am (UTC)(link)
LOLOLOLOLOL! Ah, well, there are worse reasons for a death sentence. Ooooo. Beg Me For It is my favourite trip through Ron's mind. (Also check out John's 'Not Just A River' which I read and enjoyed immensely.)

Have fun!

Icarus

[identity profile] pushdragon.livejournal.com 2003-09-02 11:13 am (UTC)(link)
Cute. I wouldn't have thought Ron/Snape could be *cute*, but it was. I have written out a sticky label saying "Genius" and I would like you to wear it.

[identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com 2003-09-03 07:35 am (UTC)(link)
*Puts on sticky label*

*Sticky label falls off*

*Ron leers at use of the word sticky*

*Someone needs to get their brain out of the gutter*

Icarus

*squee*

(Anonymous) 2003-09-02 12:27 pm (UTC)(link)
....am anonymous. sigh.


"Is this war then?" Ron gulped down the rest of the water. His eyes glittered with challenge and amusement.

"Indeed it is."


You do realize that now we're going to be begging for Snape's revenge, right?


Moremoremoremoremore. Pretty please, with a Weasley on top?

Re: *squee*

[identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com 2003-09-03 09:40 pm (UTC)(link)
Yeah. If the story's there, it's there. If it's not there, it's not there. This one was by request and I was surprised to find a story waiting. But more? I dunno, we'll see what happens. After reading Josan's Aftermath, I loved the Ron/Snape combination and couldn't find much out there. And Aftermath, wonderful as it is, is quite sad. I wanted to see some playful Ron/Snape.

I think I'd better not persue too much of this though. I've started Snape Manor, have to write SNAFU to complete the 'Beg Me For It' universe (the part after SNAFU is complete and ready to be beta'd), then I've started a new Gen fic for my dad 'A Deserving Man' ... and I have that never-ending 'Reunion.' *gulp*

Icarus

[identity profile] nataliadarimini.livejournal.com 2003-09-02 02:24 pm (UTC)(link)
O_O I remain in utter awe of your abilities. Especially your mad Ron skillz.

[identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com 2003-09-03 07:36 am (UTC)(link)
Ron blinks at Natalie. "I'm the one with the skillz, baby."

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[identity profile] isiscolo.livejournal.com 2003-09-02 05:10 pm (UTC)(link)
Hot and sexy. And making a Weasley sexy is a tough job, but you do it well.

[identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com 2003-09-03 07:41 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, I think they're sexy to start off with -- Ron is, in that crude, masculine sort of way.

Come to think of it, Percy is too, in that intensely vulnerable tie-me-down-and... then there's Fred and George with their irreverent mad humour...

Hmm. I have a Weasley fetish. *Thinks of Arthur Weasley. Cringes.*

Icarus

(Anonymous) 2003-09-03 07:49 pm (UTC)(link)
yum. i love all your interpretations of the characters.. the different rons, and Snape, oh wow.. reading "Primer to the Dark Arts" was what got me hot for him in the first place..you do him so well (ahaha, sorry)...so perfectly canon, but extremely sexy and smutty.. *sigh*.. can't wait for more...

-harvey

[identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com 2003-09-03 09:41 pm (UTC)(link)
Harvey, I love your reviews. :) Snape steams up the windows, doesn't he? ;)

Icarus

[identity profile] npetrenko.livejournal.com 2003-09-04 05:46 am (UTC)(link)
That was great.

[identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com 2003-09-04 10:24 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! Welcome to my humble abode, and enjoy the stories. There's more here (http://home.earthlink.net/~dinkbird).

;)

Icarus

(Anonymous) 2003-09-21 02:39 pm (UTC)(link)
*squee* i've been singled out by fanfic sex god(dess)..just read it again, and boy did i get all hot and bothered..again..yay..

-harvey

[identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com 2003-09-23 12:02 am (UTC)(link)
I have to admit Harvey, this one of those stories that's even fresh for the writer. I've read it many times myself.

Actually, that's why I started writing, more or less. I wanted to read some hot Harry/Ron sex, and was having trouble finding it.

Icarus

[identity profile] sine-que-non767.livejournal.com 2003-10-05 09:52 am (UTC)(link)
Hello! I'm new to your LJ, but not to your fic. Still working through it. I started with 'Ante Up!', then 'Far Too Personal' - now this...I have decided to eat up everything you've ever written and am in the process of plundering your site. I anticipate many hours of fun. *g*

The fact you made me read Weasley pairings at all - Snarry's more where I'm coming from, and with the addition of the Malfoys, tends to be what I write - was great. I add my voice to those who are gasping, 'You made me like Snape/Ron!'
Also found your comments on how you approach the characters very interesting.

*runs off to read the 'Beg Me For It' series*

[identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com 2003-10-05 07:46 pm (UTC)(link)
Hey, I've been noticing you around. So you read Ante Up, eh? Great! I love Fred/George, but I was frustrated with the lack of humour in many of the stories out there. Isn't humour the essence of those two?

Plunder away, I can't wait to hear what you think of Beg Me For It - and A Moment of Sin - two of my favourites. :D

Icarus
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[personal profile] permetaform 2003-11-17 04:06 am (UTC)(link)
Ron/Snape!! Iloveyousomuch! ::GLOMP:: lovelysnarkyhot. smug. ooo.

[identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com 2003-11-17 04:49 am (UTC)(link)
*grins evily*

You're welcome. Did you read the prelude Far Too Personal (http://home.earthlink.net/~dinkbird)?


Icarus

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two men on top

[identity profile] fourth-moon.livejournal.com 2003-12-08 03:02 pm (UTC)(link)
I agree, making any Weasly sexy is a difficult thing to do. You're doing such a great job at it...

I enjoyed Far Too Personal a lot, I'll consider this the sequel I was hoping for. It's great, fits in smoothly with both characters and FTP. Snape loosing control... what fun.

Oh I do so hope the next installment if the Beg Me For It series isn't too far away - off now to look through your latest entries.

Re: two men on top

[identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com 2003-12-08 03:42 pm (UTC)(link)
Hey, glad you liked Far Too Personal and Two Men On Top. I can't believe these two actually worked together - but they managed to strip away a lot of fakery and get down to business. ;)

I'm working on SNAFU (part 4 of Beg Me For It). Part 5 is written and ready, but obviously can't go up until the much more difficult SNAFU is up. I had a chance to talk to a Vietnam vet who gave me some insights, which helped a lot.

Icarus

[identity profile] singtoangels.livejournal.com 2003-12-16 09:32 pm (UTC)(link)
Came across the first one at AT, then read this. I couldn't stop giggling! I've been fond of the pair since I read Teaspoon, but this sealed it for me! I will be reccing this to my new community. Not that this is a big deal for you since you've been recced by everyone but God and his mother, but thought I would let you know anyway.

Write more Ron/Snape! Please? ::bats eyelashes::

Cheers,
Sing

[identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com 2003-12-16 11:50 pm (UTC)(link)
*bounces* Whee! Thank you -- and it's always good to be rec'd.

I haven't read Teaspoon. Do you have a link? Have you read Josan's Aftermath? I planned another part for this, but I'm still working on the follow-up to Primer to the Dark Arts and the next part of Beg Me For It. :)

Icarus

[identity profile] evieoconnell.livejournal.com 2003-12-17 01:28 am (UTC)(link)
Just finished reading the first one at AT, had to see the sequel, and, wow. This was excellent. I'd never really thought about this pairing much before reading your 'fics, but it's quite possible I'm hooked now. You should definetly write more. <3

[identity profile] abigail89.livejournal.com 2003-12-17 06:27 am (UTC)(link)
Just read both Far too Personal and this one on the advice from SingtoAngels. OMG. These are just too much for words. Ron/Snape--who would've thunk it? Love the "challenge" set up between them. Does that mean more is forthcoming? *begs*

BTW, I enjoyed Primer on glassreflect, but now that I've found your website, I'll enjoy even more.

[identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com 2003-12-17 01:39 pm (UTC)(link)
I've had a lot of requests for more from these two, but the story (the one in between this scene and how they first got together) is still hovering out of reach.

Welcome aboard. I put a lot of things in my LJ that either never make it to my site, or take a while. This is the testing ground. :)

Icarus

[identity profile] anjenue.livejournal.com 2003-12-17 06:10 pm (UTC)(link)
Mmmmm, this pairing is so ODD, but....DAMN, have you the SKILLZ!

Friending you, if that's okay!

[identity profile] luceid.livejournal.com 2004-01-20 09:41 am (UTC)(link)
Wow. That blew me away! I don't usually read Ron/Snape fics, but damn, that was good eatin'!

[identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com 2004-01-20 10:07 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you!

This is a follow up to Far Too Personal (http://home.earthlink.net/~dinkbird), which tells how these two ended up together in the first place, though this jumps ahead in time a bit.

Icarus

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