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[icarus]

Alright, a little more fun with Ron and ???.



Two Men On Top
by Icarus


There was a heavy, wet gasp into Severus' hair as strong, rough hands dug into his shoulders; the inept boy pressed in hard. Panted. "How's that?" Ron grunted in his ear.

"Oh, god…" He could feel the smile in the back of his neck, the faint motion of breath.

"You're so… tight," he whispered. "Haven't been on bottom in a while?" His body, sweaty and so warm was pressed into his back. Damp lips traced loose kisses on the revealed part of the back of his neck, where his hair wasn't stuck fast. Oh, he shivered, he loved that and gave himself over.

"Just haven't --"

"Ungh --" The boy maneuvred in further. Severus gasped.

"-- had sex in a while." A snort of laughter, nervous sputter on the back of his neck, delightful as it was funny. Merlin's bloody arse he shouldn't've admitted that. "Shit. What is it about you that makes me too fucking honest?"

"I'll make an honest man out of you," Ron growled -- so corny -- and nipped at his ears, then rose to his knees, manhandling his hips.

Severus arched back into him, biting his lip. He didn't remember sex being so blatantly physical before. That humid pant in his hair, the skin, so soft, stuck to his back… pulled loose with an almost obscene sound as the young man got up, shifted. Mmmm.

Ron squeezed his hips… his own skin felt so silky under his grip and Ron's hands were meaty and warm. It was his first and last warning before he drove in, harder. He began to rock, to move inside him. Severus knew he cried out, but didn't really hear it. He was thrown forward, too forceful. He caught himself on his elbows. He didn't usually like it hard, did he? Control, he liked.

The next pressed his chin into the pillow. And again. This was a man come to battle and damn it, he had a javelin stuck up his arse, forcing the air out of him, thrust in as far as he could go. Then the pressure released, his cock pulled back, just a little. And it felt soooo good.

"Harder," Severus said through gritted teeth. Ron mouthed delicious obscenities into his back, planting himself firmly for another brutal attack.

"Touch yourself for me." Ron's voice was husky, needy. In any other voice, any other time Severus would have been annoyed at the command. Severus braced himself with one forearm as he complied with a sigh, stroked.

Ron's deliciously warm hand fumbled at his balls; then he rocked forward gently inside Severus, over and over, maddening after such force.

"Hard, dammit."

"Touch yourself."

Oh god. Severus shut his eyes. His hand was frenzied, his chest arched into the pillows as he pressed his arse up to take more of the man inside him. But Ron held his hips fast, kept them to his slow, steady pace. Usually that slow pace was just right, just enough, just what he wanted, but after that hard drive he needed more. He'd been filled more. Sadist. Cruel, clever sadist. When did he ever take the boy as inexperienced?

Then Ron took hold of his hips, squeezed again; Severus panted, hand paused, wondering what was next.

Ron gripped his hips tight, and made a slow, excruciating circle. And then slid in, deeper. Then out, softly. Severus felt every inch of his arse, felt Weasley wring every ounce of delighted enjoyment out of him. He groaned. Oh god, I am being thoroughly screwed…

"Touch yourself," Ron murmured again, his voice a soft keening pant. Good. At least he wasn't in control either. Then he did that circling again, and Severus lost all concentration, mouth open in an exquisite moan.

"I can't."

Then Ron's arm wrapped around his stomach, hard and flat -- Severus was proud of that at his age -- and held him tightly as he did it again, harder this time. And harder. And harder, until Severus wanted to bite something or cry out.

He let loose with a series of invectives that would have given any student of his pause, if they weren't fucking him senseless at the moment. Ron giggled. Giggled, damn him! He swore louder, and really wished he could keep the laugh out of his voice. He had better control than this. Usually.

Ron released him and settled into a steady, strong pulsing motion that felt very easy and natural on him…slightly ragged as a hand slipped, or he got the angle wrong for a moment.

His breath started to catch, a little gasp, a boyish moan as he speeded, jerked slightly off-rhythm. Severus held very still so as not to interrupt -- as Ron came, and sagged panting, onto his back. A faint cool sheen of sweat covered his body; the only time Ron was ever cool was after he'd come.

Severus rolled onto his back and wrapped his arm about the boy's shoulders, tugging loose and then tucking the sheet in closer around him. Ron's chest rose and fell in gasps. He lay bonelessly in his arms; Severus leaned over to kiss him.

Ron said, the words brushing his lips, "You haven't come yet…"

Severus stroked his sweaty red hair. It was so thick. "That can wait." He nuzzled the boy's dewy freckled cheek. His arse was freckled, too; he liked that. "Mature men have more self control…"

Ron stretched languidly down to his toes, arms reaching over his head, and he laughed. His thick thigh slid between Severus' legs and along his rather sticky (and very hard) cock.

"Bullshit. 'Oh, my, oh, oh, fuckmefuckmefuckme…' " he quoted and trailed off into a snicker.

Did he say that? Damn. Severus rolled on top with a growl, pressing himself into Weasley's hip to teach him some manners. Ron only grinned up at him, bleary and tired. He ground a little circle.

"Next time, I'm on top." He had to admit he was far too tired right now. He was a fool to be fucking a sixteen-year-old, though usually they didn't have much stamina.

Weasley leaned up with an impish grin. "But I'm so great on top."

Severus really wished he could argue with that. He feared however that Ron had another quote in his repertoire to back him up. Severus reached over and grabbed a glass of water off the bedside table. Amazing it had survived.

"Yes. You are," he reluctantly admitted, taking a sip. His voice was deepened, muffled in the glass. He swallowed and handed it to Weasley. "But so am I."

"Is this war then?" Ron gulped down the rest of the water. His eyes glittered with challenge and amusement.

"Indeed it is."



Finis.

Comments

[cursive.livejournal.com]

That was hilarious - combative sex, which I more or less can imagine Ron and Snape having, more or less.

Although how the hell did Ron shake the myopic resentment that makes Ron's comic sidekick role so much more layered than many... I'm really curious. He's not generous enough to do any of this, he can't see enough dimensions in people. I believe it when you write it, but there's some suspension involved. I'd love to know what you think when you write Ron this way. Is it what he might be, or what you think he really is the events of canon notwithstanding? When I read your Ron I often think he is Harry dressed up as Ron - or polymorphing Ron really well.

And oh lord this is funny and sexy, and I loved it. Now I really want something from in between.

[icarusancalion.livejournal.com]

Great points!

Each of my Rons are different, for different reasons. We'll start with this Ron.

Here we have Ron-away-from-Harry. He and Harry are great friends, but Harry's fame and the perpetual attention he gets chafes some very sore spots for him. Harry brings out some of his best, but also some of his worst. The long and short of it: Ron's not jealous of everyone -- just Harry.

Ron also is stepping out a little on his own adventure here, and he's turned on and gleeful about it all. I see Ron as not having many secrets, but those he has, he's learned to guard carefully because big families are not good at keeping personal secrets.

For him, a secret is like something special, something that's all his own. Sort of like getting his own room.

This is how he is in canon with something new, open-hearted and generous (look at how warm and trusting he is with Harry from the beginning, offering what little he has). The fact that it's sex makes him all the more enthusiastic (look at his *ahem* enthusiasm in GoF). And as I suspect his eagerness to keep Harry's secrets and be in on them, not to mention his secretly practicing to join the Quidditch team, he likes to have his private little world.

Add to that the thrill of it being illicit and slightly naughty, and you have one happy Weasley.

He is generous, almost too much so, until he gets stung. This is a new world to him, so thin-skinned Ron Weasley hasn't been hurt much yet. So all his joy and responsiveness, his loving nature is right there (which comes having such a warm and physical family, the sort of kid who got hugged a lot).

People are very different in the different roles of their life. In bed, Ron Weasley gets to be king of his castle. So it's an area where he's naturally very warm and magnanimous.

Icarus

[icarusancalion.livejournal.com]

Okay, now the Beg Me For It Ron.

He's much older than the Ron in canon. He's mellowed a bit and grown more confident because of his success at his job at the Death Eater Ministry.

It's a great favour Lucius Malfoy has done him, to find his talents and make use of them. For once, Ron is not a square peg in a round hole, trying to keep up with Harry or Hermione or his brothers. He has his own realm. Not only is he a good manager, it's easy for him. He's given authority and respect, at the same time it doesn't go to his head -- because he doesn't forget that hell, he's a prisoner and his authority comes from the Death Eaters so what's it worth? This has all been very good for him. Weirdly enough.

It's established in Sex, Drugs and Death Eater Rock that Ron had slept with a lot of girls and it's one area he's (bemusedly) had a lot of success in. But Ron doesn't understand why girls (and later Draco) are attracted to him -- his attitude is, really? Great! Don't ask questions, or they might come to their senses. Draco points out that he's rather cute, but mostly he has a nice body -- "what do you think they're interested in? Your money?"

But there have been enough girls in Ron's life (casual sex, dating) that he's fairly confident that, oh well, if this one doesn't work out, there'll be another one. He's had crushes, but he's never been in love.

[icarusancalion.livejournal.com]

When I read your Ron I often think he is Harry dressed up as Ron - or polymorphing Ron really well.

Not at all. They are very, very different.

It's just that when I write Ron, I'm often writing from Ron's point of view. And his actions make more sense, have more reasoning behind them than it seems from the outside. Like anyone.

Just like if we were writing Harry from someone else's point of view, he would seem very close-mouthed, suspicious, cautious. Secretive. Sometimes even erratic. Nice guy, but who the hell knows what's going on his mind?

Look at Harry without seeing from his POV.

You compliment him and he doesn't soak it up or beam like most people, he just gives you a look like you're crazy. A lot of times you can be really nice to him, and not get any response (except maybe embarrassment), be really nasty, and he gets pissed you can tell, but he doesn't react. He's stoic. Then, just when you think that you can push, and push, and nothing happens -- wham! Something small sets him off.

Then, does he go off on Snape? No. Does he go off on Malfoy? Nope. He gets mad at his friends!

Only the people who are really close get to see underneath that stoic exterior, which he developed as a defense mechanism at the Dursleys. They get to see that he's intelligent, observant but keeps his opinions to himself. They get to see how pitifully happy he is at the slightest generousity and kindness, even normal little things really touch him. But how he's ready for the worst, always.

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Ron doesn't have any of Harry's caution, or his intelligent observations of others. He's a very physical person, unlike Harry, who lives in emotions and thoughts.

Ron is observant, not of feelings but of facts. He's what's called a 'sensing' type personality. Where Harry will notice someone's mood seems sort of up, and he doesn't know why -- and he has an insight into their motives -- Ron will notice they're wearing white sneakers. And remember they had yellow sneakers yesterday. "Hmm. That's odd." It's intelligence, what they call the 'cop's eye.' He'll see something out of place that other people won't even notice.

In sex, he's the same way. He doesn't tune in to emotions so much as he watches for visual cues. Turns out to be much the same though, since he's reading body language, too.

[salixbabylon.livejournal.com]

Wow.

How do you do that? How do you get so much into your characters' minds? Do you spend a lot of time thinking about them before you start writing, while you're writing, or after?

Do you write character sketches or Q&As or just meditate?

I don't think I've ever really thought about some of mine... Which is probably obvious, from the way I write. ;)

[icarusancalion.livejournal.com]

Nah, it's instinct, but I can explain it after the fact. Sometimes I do a little examination before a story though, especially if the character's new to me, and it always helps.

But more often than not, the characters take over the story and do what they want with it. I have little choice in the matter. Sometimes they reveal extraordinary facts about themselves that I'd never considered (Percy is notorious for this in my world). Other times I have one plan for a story (in Skinny Dipping, Percy was supposed to be the aggressor) but the characters have a different plan altogether. I just do my best to keep up with them.

Icarus

[pastles.livejournal.com]

my comment didn't show up... -__- that'd teach me to respond when i'm at work. *laughs*

was having lunch with another hp fanatic the other day, and we ended up talking about the Weasleys, we were wont to do.

I liked your Ron in the "Ask me for it series" because, yes, I can see Ron like that. He's not only sidekick. Ron *can* take charge (just not now, in the books... LOL) As I was saying, I told my friend that I can see Ron, playing a major role in the war effort, not as an auror in the frontlines but behind the scene. Ron would be the one gathering the information and spreading it. Sort of like a center for where the strategy are being planned. Ron, imho, is very observant (i like that you use the phrase, "cop eyes"). He might not know *why* someone is doing something, but he sure as hell would be able to guess what they're going to do next.

my friend also told me a very interesting thing about the name "Ronald". apparently, it means "advisor to the king" and I was thinking how appropriate it was.

Friend also said how she can see people "voting" to put Ron in the seat of the Minister of Magic (O__o though we have no idea how he came to be in that position in the first place) and Percy being the first Weasley to hit it rich. *Grins*

I will stop babbling now...

[icarusancalion.livejournal.com]

Well, I think JKR's a little too cynical to make Ron Minister of Magic. :D Besides, Ron would hate that. He'd prefer to be the one who strikes it rich -- though I suspect the wealthy Weasleys ironically are going to be Fred and George. I see Ron as just making himself comfortable -- unless forced to do more.

I think JKR's more likely to have Percy get credit for something he didn't do and have him become Minister, heh.

Icarus