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Inspired by this drawing by [livejournal.com profile] kiss_me_hard

Quidditch Windswept


He'd come to the window to tell Draco to put on his coat.

The wind scattered autumn leaves and battered the trees, made the windows shudder. It was misty and warm. Lucius didn't need an oracle charm to know a storm was brewing. But outside, the boy, his shirt untucked, spun and spun. The Snitch they'd bought him last Christmas was clutched in his hands as he dove about the green lawn, pale hair flying. He leaped, and rolled on the grass -- and then held it up triumphantly.

Lucius smiled and chuckled, his shoulders relaxed. He sipped his tea, and gave his son his moment in front of all his imaginary Quidditch fans.


ETA: See here for the difference between what a father sees and the truth.

Date: 2004-04-03 01:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] switchknife.livejournal.com
Aww. Lovely fic. :) Few people show either Lucius or Draco like this...

... Interestingly enough, though (and this is probably symptomatic of my personality), I saw Draco's mood as melancholy and yearning rather than exultant. :P There's just... this laxity to the way he holds the Snitch, a distance and tempered sadness to his expression, tempered by resignation, like: 'I can only have this now, it's only mine now because I'm not against Potter...' The Snitch symbolizes everything he can't have.

:)

Okay, I'm weird. The drabble's lovely regardless!

Date: 2004-04-03 01:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
Exactly.

But Lucius sees what he wants to see. His context for it is as a father. We know the rest, Draco's ongoing defeat by Harry Potter. So this is sort of bittersweet for those who know, and faintly ironic to watch Lucius purring over what he doesn't realise is his son's defeat. Like all parents, he projects his own childhood onto his son and vastly simplifies his son's complex emotions.

We know Draco's longed-for victory can only be pretend. As does Draco.

Icarus

Date: 2004-04-03 01:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] switchknife.livejournal.com
Oh wow, that vastly changes things... makes the whole thing so much more complex. Now I'm getting all shivery and achy thinking about it...

Date: 2004-04-03 01:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
There's probably something wrong if that didn't come across in the drabble. Oh well. Have to keep that POV.

Icarus

Date: 2004-04-03 01:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
I want to finish my thought here...

So it's not really a drabble of that picture, but sort of a frame for it, a picture outside the picture. That's why we're looking through a window, cut off from Draco's experience of the wind, etc.

Icarus

Date: 2004-04-03 07:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thistlefinch.livejournal.com
I think the idea that Lucius is seeing what he wants to makes this so much more...melancholy? I love that you expanded on the picture like by creating layers like that. From my own perspective, knowing what Draco might actually be thinking, and then finding out how Lucius might see the scene makes it just a little more heart-wrenching.

Date: 2004-04-04 03:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
I am so delighted you stopped by to read it and liked it. I don't pretend to know what you had in mind for Draco's feelings in the picture, so I think that's why I stood outside as an observer. And then Lucius appeared, also watching. With his own ideas.

Icarus

Date: 2004-04-04 07:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] february-sea.livejournal.com
Few people show either Lucius or Draco like this...

I agree. I'm all about angsty!Draco, though; it's one of my very favorite ways of writing him.

And as far as this drawing is concerned, oh, I SO agree with you...I've written a ficlet inspired by this piece of artwork, too; it's gone off for a quick beta, but I'll be posting it later. I'd be very interested to know if you agree with my interpretation of [livejournal.com profile] kiss_me_hard's drawing. Draco's melancholia is due to a different reason (not just Quidditch, strictly speaking) in my ficlet, but still.

May I annoy you once again, after I post it?

Date: 2004-04-04 03:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
Oh do, please! This is wonderful that [livejournal.com profile] kiss_me_hard's picture has inspired so much creativity. A powerful and unique piece indeed. I look forward to reading it.

Icarus

Date: 2004-04-04 05:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] february-sea.livejournal.com
:) You're a love for being so nice. I've posted HERE (http://www.livejournal.com/users/olivia_lupin/109721.html#cutid1), in case you're still interested.

And yes, I agree about [livejournal.com profile] kiss_me_hard artwork. Breathtaking, really.

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