I've ginsu-ed that semi-fic-sort-of-vignette-but-kinda-not-anything to such a degree that I should probably rename it. I was thinking "Stay Of Execution" as alternate, but I'm not sure if it... mumblemumble....
Anyhow, I've surgically implanted a plot, and now the fic is a fic. It is also completely different. It has angst. The tone and context has changed. Utterly changed. (Though I've kept most of the one-liners.)
There's one section that I think sucks, but it's not cooperating sooo, screw it.
Yes, I am editing in public. *eeeee!*
Title: Colony Atlantis
Fandom: SGA-ish, SG-1-ish (Now with more Jack TM)
Rating: R
Summary: Let's try this again -- This is what happens when Weir begins to build her vision of a utopia.
( What the Marines don't know won't hurt them. )
ETA: Did I spoil all the fun? I did say it was different.
ETAs: Minor edits
Anyhow, I've surgically implanted a plot, and now the fic is a fic. It is also completely different. It has angst. The tone and context has changed. Utterly changed. (Though I've kept most of the one-liners.)
There's one section that I think sucks, but it's not cooperating sooo, screw it.
Yes, I am editing in public. *eeeee!*
Title: Colony Atlantis
Fandom: SGA-ish, SG-1-ish (Now with more Jack TM)
Rating: R
Summary: Let's try this again -- This is what happens when Weir begins to build her vision of a utopia.
( What the Marines don't know won't hurt them. )
ETA: Did I spoil all the fun? I did say it was different.
ETAs: Minor edits