Sent new version of that OOB scene to the betas.

The section I planned to post on Out Of Bounds was supposed to be longer but one scene isn't working out.

Just sent a complete re-write to my betas. I'm not happy with it at all. In fact, I'm less happy with it than I was before. May have to reorder some scenes as well.

The good news is that two (far, far in the distant future) scenes did come out well. Those are beta'd and ready, parked in the driveway with their engines humming. Of roughly 25 scenes for the summer, 12 are written and ready to go.

Just held up by the other scenes strung between them.

SGA FIC: Out Of Bounds - John/Rodney - NC-17

You can get caught up here: Out Of Bounds.

Title: Out Of Bounds
Author: Icarus
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: John/Rodney
Summary: Not one of the students stood higher than John's armpit.
A/N: Thank you to my intrepid (and overworked) betas, dossier and rabidfan. Thank you to libitina and roaringmice for inside intel and spywork at Skate America. Special thanks to sarka for all the help with Czech history and language. Okay, so I did a teenie, tiny bit of scene reorganization. You'll barely notice it. I promise.

Previously in Out Of Bounds: Known more for his jumps than his artistry, figure skater John Sheppard hires ex-skating champion and 'artiste' Rodney McKay to be his coach. John temporarily moves into Rodney's house, but his recovery takes longer than planned. Now, the slow process of reconditioning.

( Not one of the students stood higher than John's armpit. )

SGA FIC: Out Of Bounds - John/Rodney - NC-17

What's better than birthday cake?

Leftover birthday cake!

Here is the rest of that section I wanted to post for you last week for Out Of Bounds' birthday, but one scene needed a rewrite.

You can get caught up here: Out Of Bounds.

Title: Out Of Bounds
Author: Icarus
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: John/Rodney
Summary: "Please. Go easy at first." -- "Oh, sure. Absolutely."
A/N: Thank you to my intrepid (and overworked) betas, dossier and rabidfan. Thank you to libitina and roaringmice for inside intel and spywork at Skate America. Special thanks to sarka for all the help with Czech history and language. Okay, so I did a teenie, tiny bit of scene reorganization. You'll barely notice it. I promise.

Previously in Out Of Bounds: Known more for his jumps than his artistry, figure skater John Sheppard hires ex-skating champion and 'artiste' Rodney McKay to be his coach. John temporarily moves into Rodney's house, but his recovery takes longer than planned. John pays a visit to Doctor Beckett.

( "Please. Go easy at first." -- "Oh, sure. Absolutely." )

Music to be uploaded in a minute or two.