Got the first round of changes on SNAFU
Jul. 5th, 2004 08:22 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
icarusSo far, so good. A lot more changes to the latter part, but I expected that.
Lucius: "I've no idea why you were so worried. After all, I played large role." Buffs his nails. "It was quite simple really."
Draco: "Simple? You didn't have to go through everything I did!"
Lucius, sighing heavily: "It is war, Draco. Need I remind you that it is the nature of battle to..."
Percy: "I did it! I did it! I can't believe it, I thought at the last there that --"
Ron, rubbing his eyes: "Percy...."
Lucius, glancing around disdainfully: "Yes, I think that everyone here is in agreement that he, at least, should be hung."
I'm a little stuck on the Ron/Percy/Harry smut. Just... so distracted with SNAFU, wringing my hands and worrying. *zzzzt. zot! sproing!*
Lucius: "I've no idea why you were so worried. After all, I played large role." Buffs his nails. "It was quite simple really."
Draco: "Simple? You didn't have to go through everything I did!"
Lucius, sighing heavily: "It is war, Draco. Need I remind you that it is the nature of battle to..."
Percy: "I did it! I did it! I can't believe it, I thought at the last there that --"
Ron, rubbing his eyes: "Percy...."
Lucius, glancing around disdainfully: "Yes, I think that everyone here is in agreement that he, at least, should be hung."
I'm a little stuck on the Ron/Percy/Harry smut. Just... so distracted with SNAFU, wringing my hands and worrying. *zzzzt. zot! sproing!*