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This is getting long, so the previous part is here.

The Walls of Jericho - 27 (from part 1 here)
by Icarus


Daniel stirred muggily and blinked awake, his head throbbing and muscles sore. Probably dehydrated.

He pressed his fist into his forehead, turning it slowly, drilling between his eyes as he licked his lips and tried to decide whether or not he had water in the tent, and if was worth the effort to move.

He felt as though he'd spent the night drinking. Only more… he fumbled for the word… surreal. Disconnected, like the universe had shifted overnight and he didn't have a map. What had happened lingered with the heavy scent in the tent, and the fact he still felt sticky and his sides were cold; his sleeping bag was still unzipped, folded around him tenderly like a blanket. There was also the smooth, slick feeling in a place where, admittedly, it wasn't a new sensation, but the implications here were a little more… extreme. Daniel frowned in confusion.

He glanced over. The sleeping bag next to his was unzipped and empty, and he felt a momentary surge of alarm... until he remembered Jack had this watch.

He knew he should think about this. Grapple with the implications. Instead, he rolled onto his back, sighed, and shut his eyes.

~*~*~

About an hour later, a soft rustling sound came from Daniel's tent… the shifting of sleeping bags, a muffled cough – Daniel's wake up sounds, echoing across the rocks of their little campsite.

Jack tried not to glance in his direction as the tent zipper pulled and Daniel staggered out. His hair was a little more mussed than usual, but nothing anyone would notice. Their eyes met: an intense blue-eyed stare, raw and uncomprehending. Then Daniel shifted from one foot to the other, right, left, looking at the dirt.

Jack tried to wipe the smug look off his face as he took a sip of coffee.

Daniel sat down next to him with a rich sigh. He kept his eyes to the ground as he reached for the hot water, the tip of his tongue moistening his lip… oh shit. Jack willed down his reaction and cleared his throat.

He studied the perimeter. Rocks, moss… yep, still there.

"You're up early," he observed, noncommittal. Not looking at Daniel.

"Coffee," Daniel said, toasting with his cup. His voice was a little hoarse.

"Ah."

Jack noted the way Daniel settled on his rock uncomfortably, with raised eyebrows and a surge of pride. Fucked you bow-legged, did I?

Their eyes met, and Jack tried not to smile. Really tried. Daniel folded his lips over his teeth and flushed, shifting again. Eyelashes fluttered up at Jack, and Daniel heaved another sigh.

Ah, geeze. Flirting over coffee. Jack wiped his nose and looked away, pissed at himself.

"You're gonna have to fake this better," Jack said, staring down into his cup of now too-cold coffee.

Daniel cleared his throat.

"This can't happen again," he continued calmly, studying the surroundings. Should never have happened in the first place.

Daniel nodded slowly, as if he'd been expecting this. He studied the same moss as Jack. "This is because of Don't Ask, Don't Tell?"

"No. Much worse," Jack sighed, ran his hand through his hair and pulled, finally turning to Daniel, "You're under my command."

"In more ways than one it seems." And Daniel's gaze heated.

He winced. "I'm your C.O., Daniel."

"Supervisor, actually," Daniel pointed out, finger waving in that overly cheerful way he had after a few beers. Always had to argue. "There's a distinction."

"It's called 'chain of command.'"

"Well… I can see why no one wants the boss diddling the secretary –"

"Diddling?"

"— but I'm not really under your command." He made a waving gesture with his fingers. "More like across."

"Is that what you think?"

"I'm not in the military, Jack."

Jack rubbed his temples. "Fuck. No wonder you never follow orders."

"Well I do in a battle situation of course, but that's because you know what you're doing…."

"You're in a field unit, Daniel," Jack snapped with a quick slicing gesture. "That means it's my command."

"If you say so," Daniel said casually, humoring him. He swallowed a sip of coffee. "But I do understand, really," he continued in an abstracted tone of voice. "It's not a good idea. I mean, for one thing it could conceivably damage our friendship."

"No. I don't think you get it," Jack cut him off. Daniel's eyebrows raised at him. "If it becomes a problem, I'm transferring you off the team."

"What? You can't do that."

"Oh yes I can. And I will. Part of that command thing you don't seem to get." Jack scowled at his hands. "I'm not sacrificing the functionality of the team."

"That's ridiculous."

"That's how it is."

"Define 'problem," Daniel peered at him.

A muffled voice complained from Teal'c and Sam's tent, "Are you two fighting already? It's six am…."

Jack leaned backwards and called over his shoulder, "Sorry!"

Then he turned back to Daniel, whispering emphatically, "That's what I mean by problem. Messing up the team."

"If irritating Sam is a problem then we've had one for a very long time."

"Not up for a vote, Daniel. This isn't a democracy."





Next part is already here!

Date: 2005-03-07 06:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kijikun.livejournal.com
Bad Jack! No chasing away the cute-assed Daniel.

Date: 2005-03-07 07:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
*g*

Well, there are two sides to the matter after all.

Icarus

Date: 2005-03-08 07:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
Next part's up! *g*

Icarus

Date: 2005-03-07 07:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] moojja.livejournal.com
Noooo, Jack, you can't do that!!
I'm glad you are addressing an issue, most other slasher ignore. The chain of command is there for a reason. I only read one other story where that was dealt with.

Date: 2005-03-07 07:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
[livejournal.com profile] wilderness_guru is a big fan of the show, and a military buff, and he just... insisted on the importance of chain of command, among other things.

What other story dealt with Chain of Command? I'd like to read it.

Icarus

Date: 2005-03-07 08:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] moojja.livejournal.com
It is this story: http://www.livejournal.com/users/cdeacon/46007.html
It sets right after after Menace and Meridian and it is a sad one. The chain of command is just mentioned rather being the focus of the story. But there is just one line Jacks thinks, that blows me away.

Date: 2005-03-07 04:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
Thank you for looking this up. Was the line you meant when Jack thought, "He's right," over Daniel's concerns?

DADT is a potential problem, "if we get caught." Chain of command is a definite, and starts the moment they get involved.

Icarus

Date: 2005-03-08 07:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
Okay, the next part's up. A little earlier than I planned, even.

Icarus

Date: 2005-03-07 07:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kres.livejournal.com
Oh Jack, in denial much?

More like across.

Bwaahahaha! Now that's a description I haven't seen anywhere before. And so Daniel. Hehehe.

Date: 2005-03-07 04:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
More like across.

Bwaahahaha! Now that's a description I haven't seen anywhere before. And so Daniel. Hehehe.


Yay! Originality! Thank goodness, since everyone knew Jack was gonna freak out the next morning.

Oh Jack, in denial much?

Hmmm... Jack has plenty of experience with men. And soldiers.

Icarus

Date: 2005-03-07 10:37 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] queenofstars.livejournal.com
Hmmm... Jack has plenty of experience with men. And soldiers.

You're killing me but I won't open my trap this time. I'll sit here, quiet in my corner, grinning smugly, waiting for the next part to reward me for not talking. *g*

Date: 2005-03-07 10:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
Don't worry. Soon, soon, it will all become clear.

(I think.)

Icarus

Date: 2005-03-08 07:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
Hey [livejournal.com profile] kres, have you seen [livejournal.com profile] ev_vy around?

Anyway, the next part's up. (Yeah. Already. I'm surprised myself.)

Icarus

Date: 2005-03-07 07:58 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] tigerlilly2063.livejournal.com
They simply can't do without argumenting, can they?
That's just one thing I really love between them, it's never getting boring.

But when I think of it... wasn't it Jack who started this? Ok, Daniel questioned him all the time but it was Jack who made the first "physical" move. And now he wants to back off? Sorry, but I don't think that the chain of command is the only reason here.

Date: 2005-03-07 04:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
wasn't it Jack who started this? Ok, Daniel questioned him all the time but it was Jack who made the first "physical" move. And now he wants to back off?

It's completely unfair. Jack did make the first move. He also made the first move in screwing things up with the aliens, he made the first move in running from what turned out to just a lighting system....

Icarus

Date: 2005-03-07 04:49 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] tigerlilly2063.livejournal.com
A certain colonel really needs to think about his attitudes... *winks* ... or get his ass kicked by his archaeologist...

Date: 2005-03-07 05:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
I'm having a hard time zipping my lip to keep from revealing the next part of the story.

ziiiiiiiiip!

Mwere. Fwat fhould Pdo id.

Icarus

Date: 2005-03-08 07:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
Hey Lily, the next part's up. :D

Icarus

Date: 2005-03-07 01:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dementedsiren.livejournal.com
Doesn't this man know anything? You're supposed to fit in another morning shag before the bickering and coffee. If you're going to fudge up a relationship at least make it through round two of the sex.

*sigh* Oh Jack.

(Also, yay a new section, rah rah!)

Date: 2005-03-07 02:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
Doesn't this man know anything? You're supposed to fit in another morning shag before the bickering and coffee.

That would be the, uh, fault of the 4 am watch. If you calculate it, Daniel had first watch, Carter second, and they were still going at all the way into the early part of Teal'c's third watch.

Icarus

Date: 2005-03-07 05:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dementedsiren.livejournal.com
Oh I suppose, if you want to be logical about it...=)

Date: 2005-03-07 05:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
(Darn it. I installed a pop-up blocker when I reloaded Y!M, never dreaming it would prevent me from responding to comments from email.)

Efficient is the word. Efficient.

Icarus

Date: 2005-03-08 07:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
Hello! Next part's up. :D (Already. I'm so pleased.)

Icarus

Date: 2005-03-07 01:46 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] titti
I really love this. I know I told you already, but each part is wonderful, and I can't wait for the final version so I can reread all of it in one piece.

Date: 2005-03-07 05:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
Thank you, your words are very reassuring as this part has given me an inordinate amount of trouble. I think I'm just not used to writing a WiP. Beg Me For It was a series of related fics, Primer was already done when it was posted, just dropped into the public eye bit by bit as it was edited. My only real WiP is Reunion, and that, well, it's an "update as I feel like it" kind of story.

Yep. This is pretty much my first WiP.

We're getting close to the end. You'll see it when you spot that light at the end of the tunnel.

Icarus

Hmmm...

Date: 2005-03-07 07:53 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] dustandroses.livejournal.com
You know, I thought I might rec Jerico on [livejournal.com profile] stargateficrec this month, but I want to wait until it's complete, so I'm glad we're getting to the light at the end of the tunnel - maybe by next month? (Yes, that's me tapping my foot in the corner, there. But I promise I'll behave and wait patiently...) *g*

Re: Hmmm...

Date: 2005-03-07 08:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
Well if I wanted motivation -! I have a school break at the end of March, and I return to school April 4th/5th. So I've been planning that if I didn't finish Jericho within the next couple weeks, I'd use my time off to tie up the loose ends.

Icarus

Re: Hmmm...

Date: 2005-03-08 07:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
*grins* Okay, this is all your fault. I've finished the next part already.

Icarus

Yee haw!

Date: 2005-03-09 03:32 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] dustandroses.livejournal.com
Glad to have been of service! I'm going to check it out as soon as I finish my email!

Date: 2005-03-08 07:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
Cool, guess what? The next part went pretty quickly and is already up.

Icarus

Date: 2005-03-08 09:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] celestialseason.livejournal.com
I continue to enjoy how 'real' your writing is, with Daniel messy from the night before and Jack with the whole chain of command dilemma. And the whole fight was so well written, you've got me worried things aren't going to get worked out between them ( at least not in the way I want, ie happy ending!).

Date: 2005-03-10 08:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] skipmcgee.livejournal.com
This has got to be like the 5th comment from me in an hour, but seriously... SO GOOD. There were so many lines I loved in this, and their argument? Perfect. I'm rambling, cause this perfectly fills my J/D addiction for the day. "more like across"...lol. That's so perfectly Daniel. It makes sense but sounds ridiculous.

Off to read the next part :)

Date: 2005-03-11 12:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
I'm lovin' your comments. Hee. :p

Icarus

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