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In celebration of completing my finals. (Here's hoping I did well. *crosses fingers*)

Mostly unbeta'd, based on this article on two Canadian servicemen who married yesterday. Yes, it's a marriage-fic. I read it to [livejournal.com profile] wildernessguru and he liked it. Therefore it promises to not be cloying.



Fools Can Dream
By Icarus




A blue haze encircled the surface of the Earth below, swirled with bright white above the familiar continents. There was Africa. Jack scanned, looking for Egypt.

He had been in orbit enough often now that it was as normal as watching the square patches sweep by from an airline window, but it didn't make it any less of a sight. He tapped on the window experimentally and got an annoyed glance from one of the young SGC techs, who were studying read-outs, on the alert for, oh, he didn't know, Goa'uld motherships or whatever Hammond had them doing. Busywork probably, just an excuse to be up in the air today.

One thing about being in orbit: you could guarantee the weather would be perfect.

Jack looked around at the decorations, ribbons, blue banners, flags and flowers stuck to the dull grey walls of the Prometheus. Tacky, but Jack liked it.

He tugged at the collar of his dress uniform. The extra brass on it still felt uncomfortable; he'd been a colonel far longer than he'd been a major and it definitely took some getting used to. Daniel was wearing navy blue as well, matching Jack – very symbolic of him, Jack thought – and stood with a cluster of people chatting, welcoming, and smiling his tight 'oh-shit-please-let's-get-this-over-with' smile. He caught Jack's eye and looked away quickly.

Yep. Terrified. Which was S.O.P.

Daniel had never really had a wedding before, and Jack had promised him they would be completely miserable. And boy, were they ever. Sam had taken charge of the arrangements with her usual efficiency and forced them to make decisions on things neither of them gave a damn about, yet couldn't agree on either.

Jack cringed, and hoped she was still speaking to them.

A reflection of a familiar uniform appeared in the window in front of him. Jack didn't turn around, but nodded to General Hammond's reflection.

"You've got to know this is pushing the envelop a bit, Jack."

A bit. Jack smirked at the understatement. He took a breath and said, "I've given the Air Force a lot. It's time they gave me something back."

"And by that you mean Doctor Jackson."

"Yes sir," Jack said matter-of-factly.

He wished George would go away, because up until now he'd managed to forget the whole… wedding thing. He'd kept the idea at arm's length as an abstract that might happen at some point in the future, but maybe never.

But George never did develop ESP. He shook his head. "I never thought it would happen in my lifetime."

Jack snorted. "Hell, I never thought it would happen at all."

"You sure about this?" Hammond hefted a thick black book and Jack's mouth went dry.

Last chance.

He took a deep breath and said, "No…" in a shaky voice, with a look that was probably more of a grimace.

The general smiled, patted his shoulder reassuringly, then moved to the center of the bridge, his captain's chair and the whole earth behind him.

The small group clustered on the bridge of the Prometheus quieted. They'd invited just the crew and few close friends. Teal'c stood slightly behind and to the left of Jack, a solid, real presence, and Daniel filtered his way through the crowd, still not looking at Jack, his face a little pink. He bit his lower lip and folded his hands in front of his lap like a choirboy that had been very, very bad, and stood beside Jack. Jack wanted to tell him to quit being nervous, but since he couldn't really breathe at the moment he thought the better of it, rocking back on his heels before standing at strict attention.

It couldn't be any worse than being yelled at. Or at least, not much.

Hammond cleared his throat. "Well, we have a few precedents today.

"First is one of the few marriages of its kind in the U.S. Armed forces, as well as the first marriage between two members of the SGC: two men I've known, and have been proud to know, since the inception of this program." Jack tried hard to stand still. "In addition, this is the first time any marriage has been consecrated on the bridge of a U.S. Air Force spacecraft."

"Two points for originality," Jack quipped, then mentally berated himself. He could almost feel Carter giving him the death glare.

Daniel murmured under his breath, "At least we didn't write our own vows..."

"Yes. Always cringe-worthy," Jack agreed, also very quietly, cutting his eyes at Daniel, who was trying not to laugh. Yep, no doubt Carter was mentally sinking the knife into both of them. She had worked so hard at making this nice.

Hammond ignored them. "I can't say how honored I am to have the privilege that has been bestowed upon ship's captains throughout history, and also to be the first person to continue that tradition now that we have set forth into space.

"I've always been a plain-spoken man. I like to say, politely, just exactly what's on my mind. And I have to say I am astounded that you two managed to keep such a secret directly under my nose."

"You had no idea, sir?" Jack asked, perplexed.

"None whatsoever."

"Sorry," Daniel said.

"No apologies necessary, son." Hammond continued, "That said, I cannot think of two individuals who deserve each other more." There was a brief uncomfortable silence. Jack and Daniel glanced at each other. Someone coughed. "And I mean that in best sense of the word."

"Ah. Good." Jack flexed his shoulders nervously. He almost thought he heard a shssh from behind him.

"I can't say 'in sickness and in health'… you have already been together in sickness and in health – and more than a few deaths I might add." Someone chuckled. Jack winced a little at the SGC cliche. "'To honor and cherish' is also redundant, as it is amply clear that you already do. I shall leave out 'obey' as this is Doctor Jackson after all…."

There was soft laughter from their friends. Daniel gave a broad, beaming grin.

"You have stuck by each other for better or for worse, through a kind of worse that most people could never imagine. And I don't think any marriage could ask for more."

Embarrassed, Jack tucked his chin in and prayed for it to be over, please, please, just get to the ring. He focused on the sound of one of the techs suddenly clicking away on his keyboard, just over Hammond's shoulder. Jack lifted his chin and saw the kid stare fixedly at his instruments, then cast a glance out the window.

"Today I feel less like I am officiating at the beginning of a marriage, and more like I'm witnessing one that already exists."

Guilty, Jack returned his attention to George.

"Now many of you are aware that I was against this new military policy. Initially." This caught Jack's attention. He knew Hammond's views, but couldn't imagine anyone mentioning them now. "I felt that some changes ought not to be attempted overnight, new political policies or no. That the military wasn't ready for such a drastic about-face.

"But I have to say now that seeing the two of you, together, has changed my mind. There are some things that are better for and belong in the clear light of day.

"I won't say that you don't have a rocky road ahead of you. You most certainly do. But I am confident that this marriage – more than many others I have seen – can and will weather the storm."

Jack saw Daniel stand a little straighter, and his own throat felt tight.

"Do you have the rings?"

Jack made a quick nervous motion, casting about blindly, but Teal'c was already there, both rings in hand. Daniel shuffled forward to face Jack. Oh God, he had to look at Daniel now. Fuck, fuck, fuck, he wanted this over. But Daniel's eyes were saucer-sized, which made Jack feel a lot better. He looked so much worse.

"Do you, Jonathan 'Jack' O'Neill, take this man…" There was only the slightest pause there, well done, George, "…to be your lawfully wedded husband, in sickness and in health, for richer or for poorer, until death do you part?"

"I do."

It came out as a croak, but would have to do. Jack shut his eyes briefly. Why did the rehearsals always go better?

"And do you, Daniel Jackson, take this man –"

"Sir-!" The young tech spoke up. "I'm sorry to interrupt, sir, but we have two Goa'uld motherships on our long-range sensors."

"Oh crap!" Jack swore, spinning towards the windows.

"I do-!" Daniel quickly raised his hand like a student in class.

"Then I now pronounce you man and… husband." That was less smooth, but the general snapped his bible shut, all military now. "Let's go people! It looks like it's a good thing we're out here after all."

But the crew of the Prometheus had already sprung into action. Decorations were quickly swiped off panels as airmen adjusted chairs and headsets, a business-like excited chatter between them, repeating system checks and counter-checks.

Hammond paused to squeeze Jack's shoulder. "I'm sorry, Jack."

"It's not you. It's the damned Goa'uld." Several airmen bushed past Daniel who was only inches away now. Jack vaguely recalled that some planter or something had collapsed when he married Sara. These things never went right.

"I suppose I should, um," Daniel's thumb pointed casually to one of the stations, "monitor transmissions, maybe figure out what they're saying to each other…"

"Oh no, you don't."

A look of confusion crossed Daniel's face as Jack dragged him forward by the belt, then sealed his hands on either side of Daniel's face, kissing him firmly, long and slow, lips sliding. They parted with a sharp breath; then Jack went deeper, lost in Daniel's surprised responsiveness. He was just catching on that they could do this. In the background, Jack could hear more chatter, and sense the startled, quick glances and raised eyebrows – the change of footsteps as crew members changed course around them.

Jack finally ran out of air and took a shuddering breath. "I wanted our first public kiss to be a doozy. Been planning that."

Daniel wiped his mouth. "Yeah."

Then Jack turned towards the rest of the crew… who were carefully not looking at him, though he'd expected that. He stood behind Hammond's chair, leaning on it, affecting calm when he was anything but.

"Let's get those bastards." He pointed at the screen. "I intend to hold a serious grudge against whoever's out there."

"Um, Jack?" Jack blinked over at Daniel in surprise. Weddings were the last thing on his mind right now. "Put this on." Daniel fumbled the wedding ring into his hand.

And sliding that smooth, slightly sweaty surface on his ring finger felt… right. Like he'd put this on every day for his entire life, even though he hadn't worn one since Sara. Later he'd explain to Daniel he didn't wear it in the field. Nothing personal; he just didn't take anything he valued on missions. But for now… yeah.

They stared at each other, wide-eyed and slightly shell-shocked.

"Son of a bitch, we really did it." It sounded stupid the moment it came out of his mouth, but Daniel was already agreeing.

Prometheus received a steady crackle of orders from Stargate Command, still real-time this close to the planet. The blue curve of Earth was sliding away to their left as they came about to face the stars.

"Yeah." Daniel nodded, also watching the screen. His voice was wry. "We're completely out of our minds."

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Date: 2005-06-16 01:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sffan.livejournal.com
This is fabulous, utterly fabulous.

Date: 2005-06-16 08:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
Thank you!

Icarus

Date: 2005-06-16 01:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] celestialseason.livejournal.com
Lovely fic - and definitely not cloying at all.

"And do you, Daniel Jackson, take this man –"

"Sir!" The young tech spoke up. "I'm sorry to interrupt, sir, but we have two Goa'uld motherships on our long-range sensors."

"Oh crap!" Jack swore, turning towards the windows.

"I do-!" Daniel quickly raised his hand like a student in class.


Too funny, nothing can ever be easy for them!
Thanks for sharing, and congrats on being done with finals :-)

Date: 2005-06-16 08:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
and definitely not cloying at all.

Oh, thank goodness. I generally loathe marriage fics, but this one grabbed me by the throat.

Icarus

Date: 2005-06-16 01:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] turtlespeaks.livejournal.com
That was utterly fantastic! If those two were to ever get married, that's exactly how I'd imagen it would go, attack and all.

You should write a sequel! ^_^ I just want more!!

Date: 2005-06-16 08:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
Wedding night, anyone? *g*

Icarus

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Date: 2005-06-16 01:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
Yay! That was so beautiful. ::sniffles:: I feel like throwing rice.

And I feel like you've put right what has been done so very wrongly. *g* They're just so *them* here, adorable and a little panicked and kind of brave. Great job with Hammond, too. Lovely!

Date: 2005-06-16 07:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
And I feel like you've put right what has been done so very wrongly.

*Icarus does the pom-pom dance.* This was so hard to keep from turning... ugh. Fortunately, the reality of weddings is that they never go perfectly smooth, and for the bride and groom (groom and groom?) they equal months of torture.

Of course, the main reason Jack insisted on having the marriage on board the Prometheus (other than the fact that it's cool) was to avoid as many formalities as possible (including rice), cut out any "unwelcome guests," and have it be private and completely secure. Nothing can happen up in orbit. Nothing at all.

Great job with Hammond, too.

I love Hammond. I really need to write him more.

Icarus

Date: 2005-06-16 02:49 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] theemdash
Hee hee... excellent. You do a great Jack.

Gotta say that this part--"I can't say 'in sickness and in health'… you have already been together in sickness and in health – and more than a few deaths I might add." --sounds really familiar. Don't know if it's just cliche or if I've read something similar in another fic or if I've thought it. ;)

Anyway, what line did The Alli love this time? Daniel murmured under his breath, "At least we didn't write our own vows..." *giggle* Daniel, you old romantic. ;)

Great work!

Date: 2005-06-16 07:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
Now that finals are done I can finally catch up on responding to reviews.

That line is a Complete cliche, and I almost didn't put it in. But my other version just didn't work, so I let Hammond get away with a long-standing SGC joke.

Daniel murmured under his breath, "At least we didn't write our own vows..." *giggle* Daniel, you old romantic. ;)

Yeah, he and Jack weren't very romantic about this whole marriage thing. They were going through with it, but it was Sam who insisted that it be more than just a courthouse wedding. Then Jack came up with the idea of the Prometheus -- "wouldn't that be cool!" -- and it turned out to be all they could agree on after that. :)

Icarus

Date: 2005-06-16 02:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] not-sally.livejournal.com
YAY!! When I read those wonderful news, I thought "I wish icarus does an sg fic about this..." Swear to god. I feel so wonderful, now.
Amazing fic. It's so them that I feel it should be like a lost SG chapter.
Fan-fucking-tastic.

Date: 2005-06-16 07:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
Swear to god. I feel so wonderful, now.

Hoo-rah, feel-good fic, I love it. I'm sort of hoping someone else takes up the challenge, too. (hint-hint)

Icarus

Date: 2005-06-16 04:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] melpemone.livejournal.com
Awww! I like it. And I hate marriage fic. *g*

You pinged me a couple days ago. Was it important? I replied, but you mustn't have got it.

Date: 2005-06-16 07:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
Darn it, WG must have shut the Y!M response window again.

I don't think it was important, or at least I can't remember what it was about now. I just got my copy of Off The Record which has a story of mine in it (the artwork Amy did for the story was wonderful!) so maybe that was it.

I l-o-a-t-h-e both wedding fics and weddings, and I once worked for a limo company so I can tell you allll about how weddings really go. As the owner of the company said, "People build weddings up until they're the most important day of your life, but really they're just another day."

Icarus


Date: 2005-06-16 04:29 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] dustandroses.livejournal.com
Yay!

I'm so glad you wrote this. When I read the news I was hoping someone would jump on it, and make us a story. Shoulda known it would be you! I loved the kiss.

"I wanted our first public kiss to be a doozy. Been planning that."

Hee hee...I can just hear Jack saying that.


and I loved Hammond's speech, especially this part:

"I've always been a plain-spoken man. I like to say, politely, just exactly what's on my mind. And I have to say I am astounded that you two managed to keep such a secret directly under my nose."

"You had no idea, sir?" Jack asked, perplexed.

"None whatsoever."

"Sorry," Daniel said.

"No apologies necessary, son," Hammond continued. "That said, I cannot think of two individuals who deserve each other more." There was a brief uncomfortable silence. Jack and Daniel glanced at each other. Someone coughed. "And I mean that in best sense of the word."

"Ah. Good."


You made me laugh...as usual.

And congrats on the finals being over! Yay again. No more tutoring for a while? :::she crosses her fingers:::

Date: 2005-06-17 06:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
Shoulda known it would be you! I loved the kiss.

Oh I was hoping someone would do it, too. Because I just didn't have time, darn it and--fwip!

--the plot bunny grabbed me by the throat.

You made me laugh...as usual.

*basks* As usual? Really? Coooooool!

And congrats on the finals being over! Yay again. No more tutoring for a while? :::she crosses her fingers:::

Yep. Now I have to contact last summer's employer to see if they have work for me this year. *blinks at the real world like a rat emerging from the sewer*

Icarus

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Date: 2005-06-16 07:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tafkarfanfic.livejournal.com
I almost didn't read this because of the conceit - but, oh wow! This is exactly right, with exactly the lack of schmoopiness it deserves.

"That said, I cannot think of two individuals who deserve each other more." There was a brief uncomfortable silence. Jack and Daniel glanced at each other. Someone coughed.
That made me laugh, quite a lot.

Date: 2005-06-16 07:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
Oh dear. Because of the conceit? What do you mean?

Icarus

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Date: 2005-06-16 08:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] calijirl5150.livejournal.com
I got so caught up in the wedding, I felt I was there ! Great job & Thanks :)

Date: 2005-06-17 06:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
Thank you!

*Throws the... oh shoot, they don't have a bouquet, do they?*

*Daniel gives Icarus a pointed look.*

No, of course not, so sorry.


Icarus

Date: 2005-06-16 02:51 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] paian
Brilliant setting for this, and I like Hammond's comments so much, and then exactly what has to happen to interrupt it happens, and they still get the hot kiss. Nice. *g*

Date: 2005-06-17 06:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
Thank you, I was working on really painting the setting (and Jack thought a wedding in outer space would be too-cool -- not to mention he was all for the security and limited guest-list would require, the cagey bastard). Hammond pulled through his personal prejudices about gays in the military ("Well, it's all right for them to be there, but the Armed Forces will never accept their presence, not without a fight that will tear our already tenuous unity apart").

Now I'm wondering which Goa'uld is out there.

Icarus

Date: 2005-06-16 08:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] duffy-99.livejournal.com
You did the impossible; you made me *believe* in a marriage-fic. I never would have thought that possible in a million years. Absolutely brilliant job. Jack and Daniel were perfectly non-sappy and in character throughout. And I adored every little bit of Hammond, from the "this is Doctor Jackson after all" to the "I now pronounce you man... and husband". Oh, and how could I forget Jack's priorities: giving Daniel the doozy of a kiss firt, *then* going to kick Goa'uld butt.

Three cheers!

Date: 2005-06-17 06:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
I personally loathe both weddings and marriage fics. I have no warm-and-fuzzy feelings about marriage.

I can't believe I actually wrote one. But I was so happy about those soldiers getting married.

Oh, and how could I forget Jack's priorities: giving Daniel the doozy of a kiss firt, *then* going to kick Goa'uld butt.

I hadn't noticed that, but yeah, Jack wasn't going to miss his big shocking moment.

Icarus

Date: 2005-06-16 10:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] malnpudl.livejournal.com
Yes. Exactly like that. That's exactly how it happened will happen should happen. :-)

Thanks so much for that.

Date: 2005-06-17 06:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
I couldn't agree more. It was will be ought to be just like that. Right up to the doozy of a kiss.

And I want to see that one on National Television. :D

Icarus


Date: 2005-06-16 10:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] orca-girl.livejournal.com
Yay, you! Marriage-fic in the SG-verse has indeed become something I avoid (*gack*), but not only do I trust a Tafkar rec -- I already trusted *you*. And you don't disappoint, here.

This is so very, very *them*. And that's what makes the most difference. From the moment Jack started quipping, and Daniel quipped back, and Jack knew that Sam would kill them both -- I knew it would be all right. They are just adorably uncomfortable and terrified, both of them. No hearts and roses and stars in either's eyes -- except the literal ones, through the viewscreen.

Jack made a quick nervous motion, casting about blindly, but Teal'c was already there, both rings in hand. Daniel shuffled forward to face Jack. Oh God, he had to look at Daniel now. Fuck, fuck, fuck, he wanted this over. But Daniel's eyes were saucer-sized, which made Jack feel a lot better. He looked so much worse.

That's definitely the Jack and Daniel I know and expect and want to see.

But! *Now*, I desperately need to know who the Goa'uld gate-crashers are! (I liked the way you ended it. I thought for a moment that the mothership arrival would turn out to be a fake-out in some way -- you know, Bra'tac and the Jaffa Nation showing up, or something -- and perhaps it still will, so it's even more effective to end it on this uncertain note.)

And if you do the wedding night -- I will *heart* you *SO* much! :D

Date: 2005-06-17 07:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
Marriage-fic in the SG-verse has indeed become something I avoid (*gack*)

No kidding. Nothing like a marriage-fic to bring out the ick-ick-ick. I used to work for a limo company, and our perspective on weddings is that they're just another day, but one with heightened stress for the two getting married. The degree of stress equalling the degree of expectation put on that "special" day.

At least Jack and Daniel have both been married once before.

No hearts and roses and stars in either's eyes -- except the literal ones, through the viewscreen.

Oh, they just wanted to get it over with so they can have that level of committment without the wedding fuss. Without Sam's interference they probably would have just had a courthouse document and gone out for a private celebration.

Though Jack's big on the wedding night. Really big on it. That brings out his whole "romantic" side.

But! *Now*, I desperately need to know who the Goa'uld gate-crashers are!

You know, I'm kinda curious myself come to think of it.

Icarus

Date: 2005-06-16 11:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] melayneseahawk.livejournal.com
Ah, beautiful and perfect to Jack and Daniel.

But Hammond's right. They are so already married.

Date: 2005-06-17 07:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
But Hammond's right. They are so already married.

Yeah, I think that's what finally convinced Hammond to go ahead with the wedding. It was more than just unavoidable, it was a done deal.

Icarus

Date: 2005-06-17 12:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] burningchaos.livejournal.com
Wonderful, I adore it. *hugs*

Date: 2005-06-17 09:36 pm (UTC)

Date: 2005-06-17 01:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lerah99.livejournal.com
How did I miss this yesterday? This is awesome. As always, your Jack voice is damn good. Your Jack has become my definitive Jack.


My favorite line is:
"Let's get those bastards." He pointed at the screen. "I intend to hold a serious grudge against whoever's out there."

Thank you for posting this and good luck on your finals. I'm sure you did great!

Date: 2005-06-17 10:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
How did I miss this yesterday? This is awesome. As always, your Jack voice is damn good. Your Jack has become my definitive Jack.

I am so very hooked on Jack-ness.

And yeah, Jack is pretty annoyed that his favorite part -- the wedding night -- is gonna be post-poned. He had plans for Daniel.

I'm sure you did great!

I hope so. This is the toughest finals I've had to date, from a very difficult Philosophy of Religions class to a Logic class that is known to be one of the most demanding courses the school offers (the most demanding was my Linguistics class last quarter). So, I'm not confident.

Icarus

Date: 2005-06-17 02:44 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] aizjanika.livejournal.com
This was SO perfect!!!! Thank you so much for writing this.

Date: 2005-06-17 10:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
*laughs* That's the perfect icon, and you're welcome!

Icarus

Date: 2005-06-17 07:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] stellahobbit.livejournal.com
Fantastic. Totally believable and not an ounce of sap.

Date: 2005-06-17 10:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
Okay, that's another perfect icon. Except I think they're... okay, not afraid of the future. The present, perhaps.

I bet you could do an outstanding, sap-free marriage-fic yourself. *nudges, hint-hint*

Icarus

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Date: 2005-06-17 02:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] raviahmad.livejournal.com
Gorgeous! Cute without being sappy and lovely all around. Who knows if it'll ever happen- either the gays in the miltary thing or gay marriage in america- but well, you never know.

Actually I remember reading a fic where other NATO countries are negotiating to join the SGC but the British wouldn't assign the best person for the job because he was gay and out and it would be a big deal for the Americans. Much eye-rolling by Jack ensued :)

Date: 2005-06-17 10:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
First: thank you.

Second: Actually I remember reading a fic where other NATO countries are negotiating to join the SGC but the British wouldn't assign the best person for the job because he was gay and out and it would be a big deal for the Americans. Much eye-rolling by Jack ensued :)

Really? Where? I'd be interested in reading that.

Icarus

This is charming and adorable

Date: 2005-06-17 02:39 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] sherrold.livejournal.com
and honestly, I never thought I'd say that about wedding fic! But you did such an amazing job keeping everyone in character -- not just Daniel and Jack, but the entire cast -- that you just swept me up into it.

Thanks so much for posting!

Re: This is charming and adorable

Date: 2005-06-17 10:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
I never ever thought I'd write a wedding-fic. They generally make me gag.

you just swept me up into it.

I'm working on getting my writing up to a professional standard, which requires richer description than fanfic (where the audience already knows what the universe looks like). Hopefully this made the story more compelling and real.

Icarus

Date: 2005-06-18 05:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] morrghan.livejournal.com
Awww! This is wonderful! It's sweet and very humorous.

Thanks for sharing. : )

Date: 2005-06-19 08:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
*g* Thank you! Good to know it was funny especially. Writing marriage-fics is a dangerous business.


Icarus

Date: 2005-06-18 07:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jyotsana.livejournal.com
People like you make it easier for people like me to get into the whole slash thing.

Utterly wonderful, very real, very sweet.

Date: 2005-06-19 08:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
Oh yes, come to the slashy-side. It's sunny and warm, if occasionally partly-cloudy.

And I really ought not to answer reviews after a glass of wine.

Icarus

Date: 2005-06-18 09:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yayaness16.livejournal.com
I enjoyed this very much!

Is it wrong of me to be jealous of them having a wedding in space?

Well... without the attack of course. :)

Date: 2005-06-19 08:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
Well, given it's a fictional wedding I suppose it's a little odd. But Jack was being practical -- okay, yeah, he thought it would be way cool, but he also figured he could whittle the guestlist down quite a bit by the simple expedient of having it on the Prometheus.

Not many people could clearance to attend, you see. Not to mention the security.

Icarus

Date: 2005-06-21 03:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fenriss.livejournal.com
Wheee! Sorry to come late to the party, but [livejournal.com profile] tafkarfanfic directed me here, and I had to rave a little. I, too, usualy avoid wedding and marriage fic like the plague, but this one just nails it. I adore your George, and it seems like *nobody* writes him very well.

Now, how can I bribe you into writing the post-battle wedding night? ;)

Date: 2005-06-21 06:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
Thank you. I've really got to write more George. His voice is a terrific blend of good ol' charm and cliches delivered in unassuming way.

Now, how can I bribe you into writing the post-battle wedding night? ;)

Hmm... what's the bribe?

Icarus
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