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More fun with that skating AU. John/Rodney. I'm so tempted to keep going tonight.

Part one: 'Get back out there.' – 'No. I'm taking up hockey. It'll *hurt* less.'
Part two: 'So why do we have to skate in the nude again?'
Part three: Naturally, John had brought the boom box but had forgotten to bring any music.
Part four: Rodney wondered if John knew 'Mustang Sally' was a favorite with strippers the world over.
Part five: 'This is hero worship, isn't it?'
Part six: 'Me coach. You student. You keep forgetting that lately.'



Out Of Bounds
by Icarus



The sky was turning pink by the time they pulled into the nearly empty parking lot. Just inside the door they stamped their feet to warm up, gym bags in hand as Rodney followed John into the glaring lights of the rink. It was always too bright first thing in the morning. And quiet. A few people were down at the far end of rink, not enough to disturb them. There was an echoing laugh as someone fell, and the scrape of blades.

Being late meant they were technically going to go over their skate time, but no one had ever made a move to throw Rodney out, and the hockey team wasn't scheduled today –- they were the only ones who needed the whole ice. The owners of the rink were pleasant people who seemed to like John, and besides, they got a lot of business from Rodney's clients.

John hopped over the bench, kicked off his shoes and began pulling on his skates. Rodney stripped off his coat and sweater, blinking and smothering a yawn.

John as usual was first on the ice, stretching his arms over his head. He turned the stretch into a half-spin.

Then he did a quick warm-up lap and returned with slow gliding steps.

"So we're going to skate together today?" John glanced nervously over his shoulder to the other skaters -- who were miles away.

"Actually, we're going to try something a little different."

Rodney hadn't really warmed up yet, but he pushed off the wall and with a few stiff strokes came up behind John and slowed, laying a hand on his back. "I want you to shut your eyes and just follow me. Trust me; I won't steer you into a wall."

John gave him a suspicious dark-eyed look, then sighed and did as he was told.

Rodney took two backward strokes holding John's shoulder. John reluctantly followed.

"Okay," John said, his back tight and his eyes still squeezed shut. "Now what?"

"I want you to match my strokes." Rodney pushed off again with the lightest touch on John's shoulder.

John followed with two slow pushes, still complaining. "I can't see your—"

"Ah, ah!" Rodney cut him off. "Remember our workout? I'm simply behind you at the moment, that's all."

"Then shouldn't we have practiced it like that?" John said sarcastically, his eyes open again. He cut an edge and spun around to face Rodney.

Rodney drew himself to a stop, thumping a finger on his own chest then pointing at John. "Me coach. You student. You keep forgetting that lately."

"I'm just saying."

"--That you can't do it," Rodney interrupted.

"No, I can do it. I can so do this." John's jaw was set and he closed his eyes again, turning to present his back. He fell still, as if preparing for a race. He shook his hands out; then he was ready.

Rodney was careful not to smile, though sometimes John could be refreshingly predictable. He started with a hand on John's shoulder again, at arms-length, skating backwards as he led John.

John matched his pace, his mouth in a firm line of concentration. Then, as he grew more accurate tracing the length of Rodney's steps, Rodney slid his hands to John's hips, just below the waist. John threw him a quick startled glance, but made no comment, matching his pace again.

They glided for several seconds, nothing more than that.

Then Rodney drew him in closer, shortening the distance by half. John blinked his eyes open and cleared his throat, saying, "This has to look bad."

"Eyes closed," Rodney demanded. "No one's watching." He was lying. Several people had taken notice; pairs skating did not usually involve two men. As they passed two of the most interested culprits, girls in pastel skirts, Rodney spoke in an authoritative voice, a little more loudly than strictly necessary:

"Good, that's good!"

"Ow. I'm right here," John winced.

Catching on that he was 'The Coach,' their spectators lost interest and went back to their business.

One more lap and John followed him smoothly, shortening his usual long strokes to match Rodney's. It was effortless. Rodney admired his clean lines, accentuated by dark stretch-fleece.

"Cross-steps," Rodney warned him, one hand on John's shoulder again, giving him more room as they crossed one foot over another, picking up speed in a slow broad circle. Confident John had it, though he did have his eyes open again, Rodney moved in closer to catch his hips. Their combined power and velocity sling-shotted them around the rink and Rodney caught a trace of a smile at the corner of John's mouth, though he had to pay careful attention to what he was doing now.

Rodney cut a wide circle. "Let it glide," he ordered.

"No, let's go faster," John argued.

But Rodney let go of his hips and let the momentum carry himself further until turning to coast a stop. Of course John stopped like a hockey player in a spray of ice. It would probably take a zamboni weeks to get the gouge out.

"Wow, you weren't kidding about the speed!" John said, catching his breath as he skated over, arms loose. "I felt like I was draughting behind a truck with you breaking all the wind resistance."

"Pairs skating has its advantages," Rodney agreed. "Though I've only done that with thirteen-year-old girls. I admit, I'd underestimated the sheer velocity when your combined weight is over four hundred pounds -- and did you just compare me to a truck?"

"Four hundred," John's eyes were calculating, narrowed as he did the math. "You weigh over two hundred—?"

"Not the point, Sheppard." Rodney rolled his eyes and ended this line of questioning. "That was a good start. Now," he approached with two strokes, "I want you to lean back into my hands."

"You want me to do a layback?" John peered at him. "What's next? A dress?"

Rodney sighed at the prejudices of the sport. "More like slump into my hands. Pretend you're unconscious."

John tipped his head to one side and shrugged, backing up to Rodney. "I'm really not seeing the point of all this."

"Coach here!" Rodney raised a hand in reminder.

On the first try, Rodney fumbled his grip and John put his weight back on his skates, barely catching himself before they fell. Rodney backed up awkwardly.

"Okay, not quite that unconscious." They stopped. "Just don't give me all your weight. Just some of it."

"A layback," John insisted, hard-eyed.

"All right, fine! Call it what you will. But do it without the arched back, please."

John cut his eyes to the side, then nodded agreement, swiping his mouth. This time, while his weight pushed them into a little wobbly glide, Rodney was able to hold him. He pushed backwards, keeping up a steady rhythm.

"Now melt like butter and just slide behind me…." Rodney murmured.

John had closed his eyes automatically, just as Rodney had hoped. He turned them gently into a curve. Easy does it.

John's eyelashes made little arcs on his cheeks, his face soft almost as if he were sleeping, except for the tight line of concentration across his brows. Rodney decided he had rather small, pouty lips.

Suddenly John stiffened up, jerked, losing his edge, he went down on one knee, yanking Rodney forward, who tripped, spiraled and slammed to his hands and knees hard. They skidded a little more before coming to a stop.

Not for the first time Rodney wished there were a way to fall gracefully. He and John glanced around as if crowds of people were ready to point and laugh.

"What was that?" Rodney snapped, putting a hand on his knee as he leveraged himself off the ice. He winced as it throbbed.

"Sorry. It just occurred to me that I wasn't the one driving. I didn't like it much," John sneered.

"Hmm. Interesting." Rodney's mouth tipped up into a smug smile.

"What's interesting?" John asked suspiciously.

"Nothing," Rodney said, but he beamed, positively brimming with insight. Being right was the best part of coaching. That little thrill of hypothesis and discovery when you saw what had been eluding you sitting directly under your nose. "Except that I was right, oh-so-frighteningly correct, as usual."

"What?"

"You can control the jumps. But everything else you keep, oh how do I say this? Outside of you if that makes any sense." He waved a hand. "You don't like the music to be in charge."

"No, that's not it," John corrected him patiently. "The jumps feel good. The other stuff's just boring filler."

"Well, it shouldn't be."

"What should it be then?"

"The other 'stuff,' as you call it, is the point." Rodney drew closer, drawing the number three on the ice as he turned on an edge. "It should be, hmm…" Rodney thought about his phrasing an instant, tipping his head in happy amusement. "Sexy."

He smirked and John snorted a laugh, looking skyward as he followed Rodney, his back straight.

"Try it again," Rodney said.

John was considerably more uncomfortable this time, arms stiff as he tried to lean back and stopped, pinwheeling. Rodney jerked away.

"Halfway's not good," he warned. No one ever got used to falling.

John's narrow eyes flicked to the side, glinting with suspicion. "I still don't see the point of all this."

"You will."

"Well, thanks for the clarification, Yoda." But this time he leaned back, trusting his weight to Rodney again. Though he looked like he was holding his breath. They moved into a slow glide.

For all that John was relatively tall, a good two inches taller than Rodney, he was slim and very light. Narrow through the shoulders and chest, built delicately, enough so that Rodney briefly wondered if he had hollow bones like a bird -- well, most birds. No wonder he could practically fly.

"Jumping must be pretty easy for you," Rodney observed out loud over the grinding glide of their skates.

John's hazel eyes squinted up at him. "Of course it is."

Rodney brought them to a slow stop, tipping John back up to his feet, a little less gracefully than with most of his students.

John blinked and rolled his shoulders.

"Well, that was relaxing." He skated to the wall, picking up his water bottle.

"Hmm," Rodney agreed. "Good. Means you're ready for the next step."

He turned his back to John to cover a persistent erection his soft warm-ups did nothing to hide. He grabbed from the bench the over-sized pale blue sweatshirt and pulled it on, the hem brushing his thighs. John swept him with an amused glance before becoming conscientiously distracted by something non-existent on the other side of the rink. Rodney tugged his shirt lower. He wasn't fooling anyone but he didn't have to be obvious about it.

John winced, taking another sip.

"You don't think people were watching us."

It was half a question as he scanned the ice alertly.

"I didn't notice," Rodney admitted.

"You're going get me beat up by a hockey team," John complained, not too seriously Rodney thought.

Without ceremony Rodney popped in a CD.

"Tchaikovsky?" John folded his arms defensively.

"We'll try something else first."

The complicated guitar work began, followed by the steady rolling drumbeat like a march.

John burst out laughing, bending almost double. He came back up with a smile. "It's a tango."

"Flamenco music's very masculine," Rodney pointed out.

"I need a red cape," John joked. But he was still grinning at Rodney, amused as all heck.

"Ole," said Rodney, pushing off the wall and spinning around. "Now you lead."

"What do you mean?" John asked curiously, following him with a lazy step.

"Just… play with it. Here. Watch."

Rodney got himself up to tempo, one arm drawn up to his chest as if he were holding a cape. He winked at John, then did long cross-over steps, scooping left than right in a serpentine pattern with the sway of the tango, then circled back around. "Just make it up."

"I can't do that."

"Shy, eh?" Rodney smirked. "I'll make this easy for you. I need a shower. Bad. So the rink's all yours." He gestured dramatically to the empty ice.

"I thought I was paying you to teach." John squinted.

"Ah, leaving aside that whole 'payment' issue-? Your hour was up, oh," Rodney looked at a watch he wasn't wearing, "at least half an hour ago. Have fun." He slapped John on the back.

Picking up his gym bag, he held up a cautioning finger. "Remember: No jumps!"


Music to go up soon. ;) Tango!

http://s14.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=326LWF4ZCNM9F2STAIS095ECY4



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Date: 2006-03-01 03:45 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] amalthia
I love rodney as a teacher. :) thanks for sharing.

Date: 2006-03-01 03:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it. So hard to stop it there... I'm not sure if I should have added the next part to this update or keep it separate as I have.

Oh well.

Rodney as a coach is no different from Rodney as the head of science -- except that he gets to be right more often.

I have to admit, just as an aside, after years of dealing with people in Est, well, in that crowd "thank you for sharing" became a euphemism for "wow, I really didn't want to hear that." *splutters with laughter*

Icarus

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Date: 2006-03-01 04:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tardis80.livejournal.com
ooh the plot thickens :) i'm having such fun reading this.

Date: 2006-03-01 04:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
Ah, the sensuality of skating.

Icarus

Date: 2006-03-01 05:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] twistedrecesses.livejournal.com
It makes me giggle *big grin*

Date: 2006-03-01 06:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
There's something about this story that just brightens my day. It's skating, and yet at the same time it makes me think of Clerks.

Icarus

Date: 2006-03-01 06:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] stellahobbit.livejournal.com
I'm so tempted to keep going tonight.

What do I need to do to convince you to do that?

'Cause I'm pretty sure I'd do it...LOL

Date: 2006-03-01 06:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
What do I need to do to convince you to do that?


Download Measure For Measure into my brain and write my paper for me? *Icarus asks hopefully.*

Icarus

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Date: 2006-03-01 07:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wellaway.livejournal.com
Random lurker here, just wanted to say that I'm loving this so much. Even though it's eating my brain. Seriously, I was driving to campus today and I heard "Just Like Jesse James" by Cher, and about halfway through I realized that I was imagining Rodney skating it as an exhibition number. ("Come on baby show me what that loaded gun is for"). Which is just so completely fantastic.

And I owe it all to you.

Also, it has reminded me of the days when I used to adore Kurt Browning who, let's face it, had one of the finest asses in all of skating. Perhaps even finer than Rodney's ass. Hey, Kurt and Rodney skating together...it'd be, like, Asses On Ice...

...okay, you broke me.

Date: 2006-03-01 07:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
Grrowr! Kurt Browning. We should take a plaster cast of that ass, have it brozed and mounted next to... something by Michealangelo. It's so... deserving.

"Just Like Jesse James" by Cher, and about halfway through I realized that I was imagining Rodney skating it as an exhibition number.

I must hear this!

Icarus

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Date: 2006-03-01 09:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lyndasty.livejournal.com
Okay see if figure skating had been this interesting when I was skating and choreographing/coaching I'd still be doing it!! God what I would give to walk into my local rink and see John and Rodney skating together!!!

Lovely story!!! Now I'm just picturing them skating to like Bolero or something...and in TIGHTS!!!

(And yeah I overdosed on skating during the Olympics, too...and now I'm all sad that they're over! :( )

Date: 2006-03-01 05:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
I so overdosed on the Olympics in general this year. I fell in love with skating due to Scott Hamilton in 1980. He made it look like so much playful fun.

I figure John to be the Timothy Goebel type: lively, sporty, great jumps but not a lot of artistic presentation. Lays down that quadruple Salchow like it's easy.

Men in tights... it's one of the joys of life.

Icarus

Date: 2006-03-01 09:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] 4amcoffee.livejournal.com
Oooooh! This story is *great*! What is it about the Olympics that just suck you in? You;s sit down as a complete novice and by the third or fourth competitor you're muttering critiques and criticisms as if you actually know what the hell you're talking about.

Please keep this going! I'm loving John, and the whole "likes to jump, but hate the filler" angle is really cool and goes with his character. I know John would be the same way even though I never have, and never will see John Sheppard as an ice skater.

Date: 2006-03-01 05:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
Oh, like I said above, I see John as a Timothy Goebel-type (2002 U.S. bronze medalist, first to land a quadruple Salchow in competition): sporty, lively, but gets as far as he does mostly due to his jumps.

“The legacy I would best like to be remembered for is that I’m the one who made it mandatory for skaters to do more than one quad in a program,” Goebel said. “I feel like I pushed the skaters in performing quads in numbers never thought possible.”

John's figured out that the jumps aren't enough, though, and he's not ready to give up on winning competitions. Because skating is fun, but winning is even better. ;)

Icarus

Date: 2006-03-01 10:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] triptnx.livejournal.com
where is MORE. and how did i only just find this now!?!?!?!?!?!

i love it - seriously. I used to do figure skating (to be fair, I was crap), and I just LOVE the thought of rodney and john.....*swoons*

also? feel free to go write more. Now.

Date: 2006-03-01 05:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
More is coming, and I'm a sucky skater too. But I'm great at armchair skating, really.

I pulled out all the stops on this part. I read a story once that was all about one character learning to Tango -- and wah! They didn't describe the physical aspect of the dance, just the emotional.

That will not happen here. You shall see the skating, yes, and enjoy it to its fullest measure.

Icarus

Date: 2006-03-01 11:48 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] ngaio
I thought I'd just pop in and say that I'm reading and enjoying this very very much indeed. Although for some reason I end up wanting to read about them trying to skate to 'I wanna be sedated' or something equally headbanging, but that's just because I'm perverse like that!

Date: 2006-03-01 05:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
John would go for that. Or maybe The Clash's "Guns Of Brixton"?

Icarus

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Date: 2006-03-01 12:48 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] dzurlady.livejournal.com
God, this is fantastic. My brain is too fried by lack of sleep to properly express my love for this, but I started reading at part one and expected it to finish at any moment and I was very happy when it didn't until I hit this part, but it's so cool I am happy anyway. (Eeeee!)

Date: 2006-03-01 05:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
I'm not sure whether to question my sanity for writing this, or for enjoying it so much. But there's more to come.

Icarus

Date: 2006-03-01 02:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] neery.livejournal.com
I love this story so much! I can't wait to see the next parts - although I should stop reading until it's finished, because WIPs drive me crazy.

Rodney is great as a coach - I don't think he'd do too well as any other kind of teacher, but since coaches are supposed to be impolite and abrasive and right all the time... well, he's just perfect for the role.

Their pairs skating is sexy as hell, and I really hope I'll get to see more of that.

Date: 2006-03-01 08:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
Fear not! So far I've updated this pretty much daily.

Their pairs skating is sexy as hell, and I really hope I'll get to see more of that.

Oh good, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I gleefully pulled out all the stops on the pairs skating sensuality. Mmmm.

Icarus

Date: 2006-03-01 04:18 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] reedfem.livejournal.com
Okay, you have sucked me into your ice skating crack van.
I have watched too much skating, including the cowboys on ice and russian sex bomb clips... Yowza.

Can I mention one thing I noticed? In part two, you made a point of Rodney owning a house. Then in part five, you have him living in a messy apartment. Obviously, I'm in favor of the house, since John could move right in... ;)

Date: 2006-03-01 04:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
Okay, you have sucked me into your ice skating crack van.
I have watched too much skating, including the cowboys on ice and russian sex bomb clips... Yowza.


Is there such a thing as too much skating?

In part two, you made a point of Rodney owning a house. Then in part five, you have him living in a messy apartment.

Whoops. Good catch. I'd changed it from an apartment to a house and I must've missed that reference. (Ah, beloved betas, you shall have this as soon as it is complete.)

Icarus

Date: 2006-03-01 04:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] claire.livejournal.com
Oh, I'm so sad it stops here :( This made me grin, I kind of love AUs and ice-skating, yay!

Date: 2006-03-01 05:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
This story is coming fast and furious. It's keeping my mood bolstered during an unpleasant situation and I've updated it daily for the last week. So not to worry. This isn't one of those WIPs designed to torment the readers slowly. It's quick and painless, with the medicine coming quickly.

Icarus

Date: 2006-03-01 04:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ellex42.livejournal.com
I really should have said something before...but here I am now, anyways. I'm enjoying this sooo much. Self-indulgent not just for you, but for those of us reading, as well. John and Rodney fit into this AU remarkably well, and the music you've been linking in is a wonderful addition - helps to visualize the action better.

Date: 2006-03-01 08:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
Thank you, this story has been a little oasis of the absurd. Ahhh. *Icarus does the back-stroke*

Icarus

Date: 2006-03-01 06:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mecurtin.livejournal.com
This is a great AU because you really show how their basic characters play out in a very different set of circumstances: Rodney's passion and perfectionism, but also how he can undercut himself; John's fear of commitment and of letting anyone else drive, but also how he hides himself and concentrates on doing what's easy.

Date: 2006-03-01 09:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
If it's a good story that's purely accidental, because I'm just writing something to make me hap-py. This is also in response to a recent slam. They wanted originality? 'Okay, have a whacked out AU -- and have a slice of cliche plot to go with it.'

Now to write some rebellious John. *rubs hands together*

Icarus

Date: 2006-03-01 07:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] carlachameleon.livejournal.com
I'm really enjoying this. Can't wait to see how it develops.

I was addicted the ice skating too. The image of John and Rodney skating together fills me with absolute glee.

I've added you so that I can continue reading. Hope that's okay:)

Date: 2006-03-02 09:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
Oh, please do, sure. Yeah, I'm having a lot of fun. But it isn't romance without some strife, right?

Icarus

Date: 2006-03-01 07:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] seekergeek.livejournal.com
Wow. Combine a sexy sport with two sexy men and get one incredibly sensual story. Looking forward to more!

Date: 2006-03-01 09:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
This is beyond fun. I really pulled out all the stops on the touchy-feely skating.

Icarus

Date: 2006-03-01 07:59 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] janne-d.livejournal.com
I love this whole thing so much! So entertaining and in character, and John doing the splits is oddly hot...

I'm eagerly awaiting the next part!

Date: 2006-03-01 09:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
*rubs hands together* I can't wait to do the next part either. It's just... waiting for me to finish my work... ready to be written.

Icarus

Date: 2006-03-01 08:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shoemaster.livejournal.com
This is waaaaay too much fun, and you're obviously having fun with it :D Oh Rodney, you can so make John a sexy skater :>

Such a great read, I can't wait for the rest.

Date: 2006-03-01 09:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
Rodney is absolutely certain he can make John a sexy skater -- if John would just give it up and listen to him. Ah, romance. *smirks*

Icarus

Date: 2006-03-01 10:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] coldsnap.livejournal.com
I love this series. I must admit to have become rather skating foccussed during the olympics, and this is a lovely AU. I love your Rodney, but I love your John, unwilling to let go, especially of his cool, a lot. I am looking forward to seeing more of this.

Date: 2006-03-02 09:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
I love your John, unwilling to let go, especially of his cool, a lot.

Oh cool! I've been working on John, watching him. I have another part that'll be going up today.

Icarus

Date: 2006-03-02 12:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lillian78.livejournal.com
Keep it going, keep it going. I just love this. *whimpers and pleads*

Date: 2006-03-02 09:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
Next part is going up today. *grins*

Icarus

Date: 2006-03-02 12:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nataliadarimini.livejournal.com
Yay! I love that Rodney is so...so... hmmm. Bossy. And yet huggable.

I just read most of The General and Dr. Sheppard so I'm desperately needing Rodney at his most arrogant and willful. I read Oblivious twice immediately after.

Aw. Rodney said "Ole." That makes me so happy. I love it when he thinks about John's hollow bird bones.

Date: 2006-03-02 09:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
Mmmm. Arrogant and willful Rodney, I love it. You'll probably like the next part, which is going up today.

Icarus

Date: 2006-03-02 12:55 am (UTC)
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I'm SOOOO looking forward to more. I love figure skating.

Date: 2006-03-02 09:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
Next part going up today. Figure skating is so hot, yes?

Icarus

Date: 2006-03-02 02:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bibliokat.livejournal.com
Oooo, I can't wait for John to become a sexy skater! I love that you're including the music too- thanks!

This fic makes me happy;)

Date: 2006-03-02 09:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
Thank you! The next part is going up today -- and you've inspired me to include more music for this part, that originally wasn't going to have it. ;)

Icarus

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Date: 2006-03-02 04:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] allhoneyboo.livejournal.com
I am so loving this. Rodney teaching is just awesome. He loves sharing knowledge in SGA and it's mirrored here.

Hee!

Date: 2006-03-02 09:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
Yes, Rodney's adorable when he's gleefully explaining how some sort of techie equipment works. He almost shapes it in his hands and you can see him pet the nice machines, pet them happily until they purr.

More coming today.

Icarus
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