For-Lorne.

[icarus]

And now Lorne has thrown yet another wrench in the works, because he insists on telling Sheppard. Gee, thanks, Lorne. I now no longer have a Sheppard caught off guard, but one that's on the offensive, and pretty pissed at Weir.

Oh. Also, Lorne refused to say one of his better lines because he protects people within his command. Jeeze. Give this man a ship to comman-- oh. Right.

I may take a break from this story to watch Cube.



ETA: I actually I found Cube uplifting. This probably says Very Bad Things about my view of humanity.

Comments

[lillian78.livejournal.com]

When I saw Lorne and Zelenka together on the show I thought---perfect! They're my new pairing. Adorable. Lorne needs more to do. *nods*

[icarusancalion.livejournal.com]

I agree. Lorne's a hero, yet I love his negative attitude and the way he has of sarcastically not quite saying what he means.

This scene --

"Yes, sir, we're trying." [Lorne, totally military-perfect with his boss. And then off the comm:] "Zelenka, you're killing us here!"

"I cannot give you what I do not have!"

-- was the greatest.

Zelenka/Lorne is love.

If I finish this "Sheppard Screws Up Story (and Lorne stops throwing wrenches into the works) would you be available to beta?

Icarus

[lillian78.livejournal.com]

Of course, although, I don't have the skill set to be a good "technical" beta per se more of a good idea/flow person. But I assume you use several different betas anyway in the process especially for a longer fic :-D