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An experiment. I've tossed aside my usual sparing style and spent some time on the descriptions. I hope you enjoy it. (I hope I haven't overworked it to death.)

Yep. Sam and Dean kiddie fic for [livejournal.com profile] cereta's Beloved Chores challenge inspired by Dean mowing the lawn.


Self Sufficiency
by Icarus


The rented apartment was tiny and came furnished with the kind of worn, blocky furniture that had the sole benefit of being almost indestructible, even with Dean in the house. It had a window in the kitchenette off to right, currently casting twin squares of sunset across the floor, while Sam and Dean slept in the livingroom to the left. Which made it a disaster area most days, but livable. John said that anything he tripped over got thrown in the trash without a hearing, and no complaints. That kept the hall clear of junk.

John had settled Dean in the steadiest of the kitchen chairs, his long legs sprawled, comb and clippers set out on the table next to a baseball cap. Dean's nose had freckles from too much sun, face round and boyish, at odds with his surly scowl. He looked younger than he was — a fact that Dean hated with the fire of a thousand suns — closer to twelve than thirteen, his thick lashes flickering as he fidgeted. He let his head drop with a melodramatic sigh.

John grabbed the hat and whacked him across the ear, scissors poised in mid-air. "Sit still for five minutes. I'm not telling you again."

Dean flinched and swore. Then green eyes went wide with dismay. "That's a dollar for the curse jar, ain't it?"

"Ha," Sam gloated, skinny, long-limbed and elfin, his sharp chin and grubby fingers hanging over the edge of the other chair, digging in. His tan was dirt-colored and John was fairly sure he rolled in dust like a wet puppy. Sam made a spit bubble through his teeth.

"Yep," John said, as he leaned in to trim the bangs out of Dean's eyes.

He tried his best, but Dean had cowlicks and most times he ended up getting out the clippers anyhow. The scissors made a patient snick-snick sound as he trimmed around his ears, and Dean blinked, shoulders held stiff, hunched, trying very hard not to move -- and not succeeding. Though he was quiet for a change, which was nice. John liked these peaceful moments between hunts.

John stood back and admired his handiwork. It was pretty much even this time. Some cities they were able to locate a barber on the run and get eight dollar haircuts, but John liked to do for himself whenever he could. With a nod, he made Dean get up and turn around, and the boy complied with a bored grumble, his shoulders sagging at the great injustice of a world where, yeah, he had to get a damned haircut. Dean ran a hand through it with a suspicious scowl, his face puzzled, like he was trying to feel what it looked like.

"Okay, you're done," John said, swatting him on the ass. Dean bounded for the bathroom, scattering locks of dark blond hair all over the kitchen as he made for the shag carpet. "Hey!" John pointed. Dean froze on a dime, already on the livingroom carpet, bright green eyes like a deer in headlights. "Wherever you track that," he waved a finger at all the hair, "you're gonna clean it up."

"I've gotta vacuum anyways," Dean said, still feeling up the back of his head. "I think it's shorter on this side," he muttered as he headed for the bathroom mirror.

John rolled his eyes. Jesus, his son was getting vain.

Then he slapped the chair once with the flat of his palm, and Sam scrambled up. Sometimes Sammy tried to imitate his older brother, pretending to be annoyed, but the truth was he liked to get his hair cut. John knew the signs. The way he'd go all quiet and dreamy, his eyes unfocused, staring out into nothing. The way his left foot would start to wiggle. John had to put a hand on his knee now to get him to stop, and Sam looked up at him with soft almond-shaped brown eyes, apologetic. John smiled at his boy.

Sam's hair was both easier and harder than Dean's. It mostly only had one direction, but there was just so damned much of it, and it grew fast. It had taken him a long time to learn how to cut it so that Sam didn't look like a brown mop.

Now he cut slow and straight across the front with the bangs, Sam wincing as he chewed his lip, looking up, cautious but trusting. John left a little bit over the ears because it'd be over his ears in a week at any rate, and it was easier to get it right this way. Then as Sam relaxed into a slouch, he cut short chunks across the back, dark hair falling down the back of Sam's shirt like dead spiders. He went in again to catch the stray hairs, then once more, because, again, so damned much of it. Unlike Dean though, he could take his time.

Sam sat in the chair, as peaceful as could be, the one foot kicking a little bit. John wondered what Sam thought about when he did this.

"Okay," John said in almost a whisper, caught in the spell, "We're done," and Sam shook himself like he was waking up.

"Daaaad!" Dean yelled from the bathroom, his high voice echoing off tile. This part was predictable, too. "It's crooked!" He stomped down the hall with his hand on the back of his head like he was trying to hide it. "Gimme the damned clippers."

"Ooo!" Sam said, turning, just to make sure his brother's slip was noticed, John figured.

"Dean!" John growled. It was the tone that mattered.

"Okay, I'll pay the dollar, sir. But man, dad, you suck at this." His voice cracked on 'suck,' dropping an octave like a car slipping out of gear. "Just -- the clippers. Please." Dean held out his hand, the other hand still clapped to his head like it was a wound. "I'll do it myself."

John was surprised at his reluctance to hand them over, though he did. He should be grateful for Dean's independence, as it freed him up from another chore.

He considered that reluctance as he opened the fridge and got himself a beer, bottles in the door rattling as it shut. Sam scampered down the hall to bug his brother. John tossed a pair of underwear to the floor as he settled on the couch, thinking it was high time for some military discipline. Inspections, for example.

The low hum and buzz of clippers came down the hall from the bathroom, and Sam's voice, "Oh, yeah, that looks a lot better."

"It does?" Dean's voice brightened, hopeful.

"No."

"I'm gonna buzz your hair, Goldilocks," Dean threatened.

"Hey, quit it!" And Sam's predictable exit, stumbling out of the bathroom, both hands clapped to his head.

John smiled to himself, content as he lifted the beer. Dean was going to make mincemeat of his hair. And yeah, maybe he just didn't want them growing up too soon.


Date: 2007-05-10 12:39 pm (UTC)
wolfshark: (Default)
From: [personal profile] wolfshark
Awww, and heeee!

Having cut my own bangs *once*, I can only imagine what Dean's hair is going to look like when he's done!

Date: 2007-05-10 12:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
With. Clippers. And no clue how to use the attachments. Sam is going to laugh.

Yeah, the boy still needs his father. And he's going to be eating crow shortly when he asks his dad to fix it.

Icarus

Date: 2007-05-10 01:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] psycho-tabby.livejournal.com
Very cute *grin*

Date: 2007-05-10 01:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
Hee. I just want to pack these little grubby Winchesters in a box and take them home.

Date: 2007-05-10 06:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rane-ab.livejournal.com
furniture that had the sole benefit of being almost indestructible, even with Dean in the house

*laughs*

Dean's grumpiness is so cute. And dreamy!Sam, hee. Love the ending, too. :-)

Date: 2007-05-10 09:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
Haircuts have several problems for Dean:

1) he has to sit still,
2) he has to sit still while dad mangles his hair,
3) he has to sit still,
4) the icky feel of falling down his face and neck and in his eyes (well, not really, but that's his worst-case scenario),
5) that feeling of being dominated
6) not being able to see what's happening, which he hates, bringing us back to
7) the fact that he knows his dad is mangling his hair.

Icarus

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Date: 2007-05-10 06:57 pm (UTC)
amalthia: (Default)
From: [personal profile] amalthia
rofl, loved this story. :)

Date: 2007-05-12 07:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
Thank you. :)

Date: 2007-05-10 08:01 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] mad_maudlin
John was fairly sure he rolled in dust like a wet puppy.

That mental image is just charming. :-)

Date: 2007-05-12 07:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
Now I'm grinning. Thank you. And by the way, your comment helps me quite a bit. This was an experiment in allowing myself to hog-wild on the description. I wrote the bare bones and then layered in more and more description, like you'd layer watercolors. That was a description I added in a very late edit.

It worked.

Date: 2007-05-11 03:49 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] ansku
It's adorable :) They are so cute and small and still recognizable for them :)

Date: 2007-05-12 08:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
Thank you, and I like how you get the visuals on how little they are. They are so small. Dean's even small for his age.

Date: 2007-05-11 07:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chasethecat.livejournal.com
Awww, this was so cute!

Date: 2007-05-12 08:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
Thank you. I love speculating on their childhoods, even while I read for the demon-disemboweling slash.

Icarus

Date: 2007-05-28 06:49 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] embroiderama
I love every bit of this---the description of their surroundings and of the boys from John's POV, their differing reactions to the haircuts, John's reflections on doing it for them, and the very funny ending of Dean mangling his hair and Sammy running out of there in fear for his own mop. Wonderful!

Date: 2007-05-28 07:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
Thank you. *g* It's even money whether Dean's pride or his vanity will win, though my vote is vanity. He'll just have to hand over the clippers and ask dad to fix it.

Date: 2007-05-28 11:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rockingdebater.livejournal.com
This was awesome. Defenitely made me smile. Wonderfully done. God Bless!

Date: 2007-05-29 02:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
Thank you. Good to end the day with a smile.

Date: 2007-05-28 11:15 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] innie_darling
Something about this story just made me choke up. Maybe it was your description of Sammy's daze? Maybe just the mood of it.

Date: 2007-05-29 02:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
Aww. It strikes me that it was probably rare that they got to have these quiet moments as a family, and this, despite Dean's complaints, was what Dean missed. I imagine John was reluctant to intrude on his kids' childhoods, even though he had to. But he kept them young where he could.

Icarus

Date: 2007-05-28 11:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] girlfan1979.livejournal.com
Utterly adorable, and a believable look at all three Winchester men.

Wonderfully done.

Date: 2007-05-29 01:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
Thank you. Now someone needs to take those clippers away from Dean before he uses them on Sam in his sleep.

Date: 2007-05-29 02:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lnhart.livejournal.com
I could see Sam enjoying the hair cutting experience. Adult Dean definitely approaches his hair with impatience--probably learned from childhood. This was nicely done.

Date: 2007-05-29 02:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
Thank you.

I could see Sam enjoying the hair cutting experience.

I think it's getting his dad's undivided attention that's so rewarding.

Date: 2007-05-29 03:48 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] dairwendan.livejournal.com
I loved this! Your descriptions are excellent! Definitely not overworked!

Great look at the Winchesters!

Date: 2007-05-29 04:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
Thank you! Oh, what a relief. I love the wee little wee!chesters.

Icarus

Date: 2007-05-29 04:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tiffosis.livejournal.com
kid!sam and dean fics are fun, good read!

Date: 2007-05-29 05:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
They're such adorable puppies, so close and yet so different from each other.

Icarus

Date: 2007-05-29 05:12 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] lark_ascends
This is absolutely adorable and feels perfectly like them.

Date: 2007-05-29 05:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
Hee. Thank you. *pets freshly clipped wee!chesters*

Date: 2007-05-29 05:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ewanspotter.livejournal.com
Heh. This was really cute, with just a touch of sadness to it, too. Great job. :D

Date: 2007-05-29 08:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
Thank you.

...with just a touch of sadness to it, too.

Yes. John regrets having to train his boys to grow up so soon, so he keeps them young where he can.

Icarus

Date: 2007-05-29 11:58 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] phantomas.livejournal.com
Totally adorable, great ICness of them all (imo), grumpy/not able to sit still Dean is to die for, and little Sammy and John..well, I'm partial to John, and I like to see these moments when he is the decent father he's certainly been at some point (or the boys wouldn't love him so much). Erm ;)

thank you!
Is it okay to link at [livejournal.com profile] papawinchester?

Date: 2007-05-29 03:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
Sure! Go for it. :D

Thank you.

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Date: 2007-05-29 12:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] unhobbityhobbit.livejournal.com
Hee, I always love little domestic snippets of their life at home.

How long do you think Dean's going to stubbornly try to fix his hair before he admits he needs his dad's help?

Date: 2007-05-29 04:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
Um. How much hair does he have? Sam is going to really enjoy this.

"You look like a prisoner."

"Shut up!"

Date: 2007-05-30 01:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] saberivojo.livejournal.com
I like this grumbley Dean. Muttering about having to "vacuum anyways." Dumping money in the curse jar...We always hear about how he always jumps to, but I think he was still a kid, and at this age, pissiness is the name of the game.
Sam seems perfectly brotherly, nagging, trying to get Dean in trouble.
The last sentence was just perfect. Nicely done.

Date: 2007-05-30 05:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
I was debating with myself about the characterization here. On the one hand, Dean is very "sir, yes, sir!" On the other hand, he's thirteen.

I figured that Dean wouldn't be so obedient when it came to the small things like doing his chores and his homework, but he'd instantly be the little soldier when it came to the important things that could save their lives.

Dean's a smart kid. He knows the difference. I think even at that age he had his own priorities.

And "not swearing" wasn't one of them. ;)

Icarus

Date: 2007-05-31 03:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] penfold-x.livejournal.com
Aw, this was sweet (and bittersweet). I like the detail (Dean's inability to sit still, Sammy's dream/trance, the byplay between the brothers).

John was surprised at his reluctance to hand them over, though he did. He should be grateful for Dean's independence, as it freed him up from another chore.

V. nice way of expressing John's ambivalence.

Date: 2007-06-02 07:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
Aw, this was sweet (and bittersweet)

Yeah, John's enjoyment underscores how rare these quiet moments were.

Icarus

Date: 2007-06-02 06:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lorelei633.livejournal.com
(here via [livejournal.com profile] papawinchester)

Beautifully done. It felt real, like a snapshot of a moment in their lives, and they were all so in character. Dean wobbling on the brink of manhood, grumbling, wanting to rebel even as he obeys, John letting himself relax and enjoy the brief moments he's able to have with the boys, and Sam, dreamy, watching, absorbing everything, waiting for his turn in the chair. I really like the way you illustrated the differences between the boys so deftly and so subtly. One of my favorite weechesters stories yet. Thanks so much!

Date: 2007-06-02 07:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
Thank you. I love this -- Dean wobbling on the brink of manhood. Yes, exactly.

Icarus

Date: 2007-06-02 07:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] particlesofgale.livejournal.com
This was adorable. I love little glimpses in the
Winchesters "everyday" lives. And the image of
wee!Sam rolling around in dust is going to stay
with me for a very long time. Thank you for
sharing.

Date: 2007-06-02 07:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
Without a mom, John as a single dad off hunting, and Dean mostly being the one to look after Sam, oh, I bet Sammy was a grubby little thing.

Icarus

Date: 2007-06-03 12:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yasminke.livejournal.com
Very cute. Thanks for posting it.

Date: 2007-06-03 02:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
Thank you! *beams* *ruffles wee!chesters little heads -- gets an irritated duck away from Dean, and an affronted look from Sam*

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Date: 2007-06-04 03:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] starrylizard.livejournal.com
Aww, I love wee!chester stuff. SO cute and I love the surly-ness of Dean. :)
Yay for you writing SPN fic.

Date: 2007-06-04 04:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
When does season three start?

Icarus

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Date: 2007-11-18 04:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] brigid-tanner.livejournal.com
LOL!! that's so sweet. Loved the last line.

Date: 2007-11-18 04:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
You're way ahead of me. *laughs*

You've almost emptied out my entire supply of SPN fanfic thus far. All that's left is the unfinished snippet with the working title Deak Woke Up Gay (http://icarusancalion.livejournal.com/621082.html#cutid1). But I won't be able to get back to work on it until after Dec. 15th.

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