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Okay, [livejournal.com profile] sga_santa fic ready. Now. *rubs hands together* My other projects.

You can get caught up here: Out Of Bounds.


Title: Out Of Bounds
Author: Icarus
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: John/Rodney
Summary: John gazed down at his leg in disappointment.
A/N: Thank you to [livejournal.com profile] perfica for playing OOB beta badminton with me all these months. Thank you to [livejournal.com profile] libitina and [livejournal.com profile] roaringmice for inside intel and spywork at Skate America. Special thanks to [livejournal.com profile] sarka for all the help with Czech history and language (not to mention the cool music).
Previously in Out Of Bounds: Known more for his jumps than his artistry, figure skater John Sheppard hires ex-skating champion and 'artiste' Rodney McKay to be his coach. John's recovery from his injury is slower than he would like.


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Out Of Bounds
by Icarus


"Been keeping off the leg like a good lad, have you?" Doctor Beckett's eyes sparkled at John.

"After we shackled him to a chair," Rodney said with a snort. He'd brushed by the flustered nurse, who lifted her hands and let them fall in a hopeless gesture.

Doctor Beckett glanced from the nurse, to Rodney, to John, puzzled, so John indicated Rodney with a wave. "Doctor Beckett, meet Rodney McKay. He's my coach." And damn, he was going to have to learn to say that without the sudden warmth that hit him, or the blush, otherwise people were going to know what was going on.

"Charmed," the doc said, giving Rodney a doubtful look.

John gazed down at his leg in disappointment. The hair had mostly worn off his calf, the muscles thinner than the other one, skin a pasty grey-ish white. His take-off leg. It looked worse than it had after surgery.

"—It'll take some time to restore the muscle tissue," Doctor Beckett was saying, "so we don't want to give it any undue stress. Moderate exercise only." He waited till he had John's attention then held John's eyes and said, emphatically, "No. Jumping."

"Perhaps jesses would be in order," Rodney mused, thumbnail trailing along his lip. "I caught him climbing six flights of stairs."

John glared at the tattletale. Also—six flights? "It was three."

The doc didn't seem that impressed.

"They weren't very steep."

John decided he handled the doc better when Rodney wasn't here.

"Low to no impact, please," Doctor Becket continued, sighing.

"Is stretching acceptable?" Rodney asked, his hand dropping away from his face. John had seen that look before. Rodney had an idea.

"Oh, yes, in fact that would be very good."

~*~*~

The place had wooden floors, bright red hangings, and smelled like a Grateful Dead concert; a mix of incense, patchouli, and that unmistakable whiff of pot. Behind the counter there was a brass statue of a naked lady with more arms than anyone needed, draped with a pink Hawaiian lei.

At the sound of people in the next room intoning "Ommmmmm...." John was pretty much ready to turn around. Although Rodney had already driven off. Still, walking home was moderate exercise, right?

"You here for the free class?" a deep voice behind him asked.

John spun around to find a tanned, muscular guy with long dreadlocks behind the counter, bare-chested except for a necklace and a suede vest.

"Uh. Yeah," John said.

"That'll be forty bucks."

John paused. He hadn't even brought his wallet; even if he had the cash....

The big guy flashed him a white smile. "I'm just messing with your head."

He gestured with a jerk of his chin for John to follow. The sound of "Om" grew louder as he cracked open the door.

John hung back, swiping at his mouth with a nervous glance back at the street. "Do I, uh, do you have to do the whole 'Om-ing' thing?"

"No. But you're gonna wish you had." The big guy tapped his forehead. "Helps up here."

"I think I'll—" John caught sight of a framed poster of a newspaper review next to the door with a photo of the big guy looking even bigger and the name, Ronon Dex. "Wait. You're the yoga instructor?"

"You got a problem with that?"

"No, I just—" John cut himself off. "You know what? Never mind." He followed the guy into a room full of mostly women who had finished chanting and were now seated cross-legged, meditating. The big guy stalked to the front while John tiptoed like a nervous cat and found an empty mat in the back.

"No," Ronon said. The group startled, then turned around to stare at John, who froze, one hand on the mat, his knee still raised. "I want you to sit in the middle where you can watch everyone else."



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Date: 2007-12-22 04:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] moojja.livejournal.com
I love this. Are you going to make John do a Biellmann? I'm glad to see Ronon entering the picture.

I have the perfect picture for this too.
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Date: 2007-12-22 05:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
Oh, ha! That's great!

Rodney could do a Biellmann back in the day.

Date: 2007-12-22 04:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rike-tikki-tavi.livejournal.com
RONOOOOOON!!!!

Date: 2007-12-22 05:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
*grins* Oh yes. Ronon had to be in there somewhere. ;)

Date: 2007-12-22 05:34 am (UTC)
libitina: Wei Yingluo from Story of Yanxi Palace in full fancy costume holding a gaiwan and sipping tea (Default)
From: [personal profile] libitina
You found a way to add Ronon! Excellent!

Date: 2008-03-03 06:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
I'm so pleased about Ronon-the-yoga-instructor. *sniggers* But he walked right into the role easily. (Teyla's coming soon.)

Date: 2007-12-22 05:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] crownglass39.livejournal.com
Ronon as a yoga instructor rocks! He'll scare people into the down facing dog...

Date: 2008-03-03 06:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
I love Ronon as a yoga instructor. *laughs*

Date: 2007-12-22 07:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] whatifisaidno.livejournal.com
I haven't read this far yet, but I love this story. Your characterizations are always brilliant; the characters seem to ease into the environment flawlessly despite being such an AU. And as far as I can tell, you know a lot about figure skating. The details add to the story.

Date: 2008-03-03 06:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
Thank you. Sorry for the late reply -- I was trying to blaze forward on the story and am just catching up on comments now.

As for the for the figure skating details, I didn't know much when I started, but I've done oh so much research, and then a couple of competitive skaters started reading it (they like it!) and tweaked the details ([livejournal.com profile] roaringmice and Amy, a Canadian skater).

Date: 2007-12-22 09:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sulien77.livejournal.com
*snorfle* Ronon as a yoga instructor. Perfect!

Date: 2008-03-03 06:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
I can't explain why that works, but it so does.

Date: 2007-12-22 01:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] percysowner.livejournal.com
Oh lord Ronon the yoga instructor, and just the picture of John doing yoga, this is delightful and wierd at the same time. OTOH, I just rewatche the Dead Like Me episode where Harold Perrineau from lost played an yoga instructor, and it actually helps with the image. I do love this story. Thanks for the holiday update.

Date: 2008-03-03 06:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
I think it's even weirder that Ronon's into the Hindu aspect, not just the exercise, but really into it.

Date: 2007-12-22 02:33 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] helkamaria.livejournal.com
I've never watched SGA or read any SGA fics, but I had a few hours to kill, so I started to read this. But damn if you haven't got me completely hooked.

Date: 2008-03-03 06:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
Yay! Another addict!

Sorry about the late reply. I was trying to crank out as much of the story as I could, as fast as I could, and I'm just catching up now.

I just posted lots more, if you're interested.

Date: 2007-12-22 04:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rabidfan.livejournal.com
Hee! Ronan!

I remember that nasty (and even smelly!) skin tone when a cast comes off...I spent a summer with full casts on both legs following surgery. My admiration for your mastery of the tiniest details grows and grows!

Date: 2008-03-03 07:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
You're too sweet. I don't know where I remember the pasty skin tone from when a cast comes off, but I've seen it somewhere. I get a vague flash of high school and junior high when I think of it, but I haven't pinned it down.

Date: 2007-12-23 02:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dear-sweet-lana.livejournal.com
Yay! Ronon! He's my favorite. *nod*

Date: 2008-03-03 07:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
I'm so glad he showed up in my story. Teyla's coming soon, too.

Date: 2007-12-23 02:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] feanna.livejournal.com
I've been keeping up with the story and I continue to enjoy it. This time I liked the "more arms than anyone needed" in particular. Let me also add my own Yay for Ronon the Yoga instructor. Yoga does seem like the thing that would do Johm good while being exactly what he would never do without being forced.

Date: 2008-03-03 07:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
This time I liked the "more arms than anyone needed" in particular.

Thank you! John has an odd way of looking at things. All those arms would look impractical. How would you put a shirt on?

Date: 2007-12-23 06:19 am (UTC)
lannamichaels: Astronaut Dale Gardner holds up For Sale sign after EVA. (Default)
From: [personal profile] lannamichaels
This is great. I just spent the last two hours reading the entire thing. Great fic. :)

Date: 2007-12-25 10:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
Now I'm almost intimidated (almost). I have a good familiarity with who's in the (rather small if prolific) SGA fandom, and I didn't recognize your name. I checked out your profile and you're a skating and Star Trek fan. (Loved your Lysacek gallery. *g*) I hope this story continues to measure up. How did you hear about it?

Icarus

Date: 2007-12-25 11:05 pm (UTC)
lannamichaels: Astronaut Dale Gardner holds up For Sale sign after EVA. (Default)
From: [personal profile] lannamichaels
Actually, I'm in skating RPS fandom.([subliminal recruiting]If you're interested, check out [livejournal.com profile] ice_slash[/subliminal recruiting]) I've watched some SGA and SG-1 and read fic in it, but haven't written anything in it. I actually found your fic through a google alert on Skate America, which sent me to greatestjournal, which sent me to the fic proper, which sent me to this entry. Bit convoluted there...

Date: 2008-03-03 07:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
I checked it out. I'd probably read skating RPS but not write it. I always feel funny writing RPS. I can't possibly get the characterization right unless I know the real people, and I'm a stickler for getting the details "right."

Gotta run. The cat just got up on my table.

Date: 2007-12-24 01:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] adafrog.livejournal.com
Great, thanks.

Date: 2007-12-25 09:13 pm (UTC)

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