Tie-breaker beta?
May. 3rd, 2008 09:10 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
icarusI have a tie.
No, not a necktie, there are none of those in this house.
I am ready to post the next part of Out Of Bounds. I am *this* close (makes little pinching gesture with thumb and forefinger) to posting it.
But first. I have a scene where one beta likes how it's written and the other does not. Usually where I suck, all betas see it and agree. They may see it from different angles but they see the same things. This time ... not so much. Several re-writes have not sufficed.
I need a tie-breaker beta.
What's in it for you?
You get to read the next scene -- nay, next three scenes, I'll throw in two more and a set of ginsu knives -- early.
How 'bout it? It's a short scene. Only 290 words is mucking up the works.
No, not a necktie, there are none of those in this house.
I am ready to post the next part of Out Of Bounds. I am *this* close (makes little pinching gesture with thumb and forefinger) to posting it.
But first. I have a scene where one beta likes how it's written and the other does not. Usually where I suck, all betas see it and agree. They may see it from different angles but they see the same things. This time ... not so much. Several re-writes have not sufficed.
I need a tie-breaker beta.
What's in it for you?
You get to read the next scene -- nay, next three scenes, I'll throw in two more and a set of ginsu knives -- early.
How 'bout it? It's a short scene. Only 290 words is mucking up the works.
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Date: 2008-05-04 01:27 pm (UTC)just in case.