Harry/Snape - more drabbles: Primer universe, deleted scene.

[icarus]

Harry/Snape for barbana. Well, you wanted a tidbit from Snape Manor, but I felt that I really couldn't do that. So, here's a steamy piece I cut from Primer to the Dark Arts. ;) Enjoy.



Severus had finally managed to get Harry to take a shower. Harry's arms were draped around his shoulders and chest, the water cascading down their backs. It turned Severus' hair into a smooth black sheet, slick and soft along Harry's shoulder. Harry leaned his chin against Severus' collarbone with a sigh.

"Mmm. I love the hair." Harry nuzzled him.

"Really? I hadn't heard."

Severus' habitual toss of his head made the fine sheet of his hair dance along Harry's back. As he well knew. The reaction was predictable. Not that Harry being predictable was always a bad thing. Harry was very willing by the time Severus got him to the bedroom. Soft sheets and downy pillows were always his preference.

They sank into the inviting white pillows and crisp, clean sheets; Harry climbed into the bed backwards and Severus tumbled over him.

The sharp, fresh taste of Harry was in his mouth. He was boyish and firm, sweet and he smelled of soap and that outdoors musk that never left him. A teenager's legs poked up to either side of Severus, and he took the time to admire them with his tongue, while Harry's hands tangled and rumpled his hair. Harry swept it behind Severus' ears.

They rolled together until they found themselves sideways across the bed, Harry's head dangling over the side, his hair spiked by gravity. His face was flushed, and he laughed. Severus slid an arm under his shoulder and scooped him back onto their bed — their bed, such a thought — and Harry giggled, of all things. Severus' heart skipped a beat. Harry was so alive and eager, and wanted him. The entrance was well-prepared from their time in the shower, and with a shiver Harry welcomed him, easily. His legs scissored over Severus' back, casual, relaxed… Severus stroked in at an easy pace, liquid and smooth, one he knew he could maintain for some time.

Harry knew it as well, and gave him a languid smile, a faint challenge in his eyes: You think you have the stamina to outlast me, Severus? that glance said. Harry lifted his arse into a slightly smoother angle. We'll just see about that.

Severus merely glittered at Harry in response, and his lips parted in a ravenous smile. Yes. We shall.



Twelve down, seven more to go:

Primer to the Dark Arts: Morning Breath, deleted scene, NC-17 version. Harry/Snape for barbana
More Than One Way To Win Tom/Harry for auxphono
Weasleys Come in Twos and Threes Fred/Harry/George for lyricalnights
Deep Throat Percy/Severus for chaos_rose
A '57 Vincent And A Red-Headed Boy - Ron/Sirus for wanderingscribe
It Was All Right Harry/Ron for ragnhildholm
Safeword Percy/Severus wired_lizard
Rat For Dessert Peter/Severus for _greenie_
Christmas Fluff Percy/Harry for haku_kaen
Not My Affair VIII: Steam Ron/Percy (muse got really out of control)
Not My Affair VII: A Toast To Misery Ron/Percy (muse got out of control)
Not My Affair VI: A Year Later Ron/Percy for isolde9 (follow up to Not My Affair 1-5)
In November Neville/Ron for ursule
A Little Night Music Hermion/Rita for mark356

More coming!

Fred/George NC-17 for ygrane
Ron/Draco for thywillbedone
Hermione/McGonagall (optional) for puella_deville
Harry/Cedric for blithesea
Harry/Snape (Harry dominant, NC-17) for vileseagulls
Percy/Draco, Beg Me For It universe for tboy
Severus/Harry, with extra snark bluemoon02

Comments

[exbentley]

and he took the time to admire them with his tongue,

Oh, my god.

*speechless*

*pisses off to read primer to the Dark Arts*

[helenwalter.livejournal.com]

you mean you haven't read it yet. go go go!!

[icarusancalion.livejournal.com]

Yeah, Primer was originally conceived of as a PWP, interpreted to mean 'Porn with Plot.' Then the plot became more involved, simply to bridge that arc from Harry/Ron to Harry/Snape.

*Icarus beams at new Primer convert.*

Icarus

your kidding

[http://users.livejournal.com/the_brian_/]

Primer is so thick with plot and emotion. I would never believe it started as a PWP if anyone else had said it. I thought I'd like to take this time to say that I love and loath Primer. I have read it atleast 3 times in the 2 weeks i discovered it. I love it for you style and ability to capture all parts in a perfect balance. But I loath it because my standards have now been raised by it and I can not read any other Harry/Snape than the ones you create. You are a brilliant writer. just offering my slightly jaded thanks.

Sidenote: I was intersted by the concept of the book of Eros, and the Harry/Ron involvement early in the work. I was wondering if there lay a possiblilty for something along the lines of, what would happen if they used the memory charm? I have a long storyline working in my mind if your interested in hearing it.

Thankyou for sharing your craft. You are brilliant.

[laurelwood.livejournal.com]

I'd have been speechless with outrage if I'd known that'd been cut from "Primer", but now I'm grateful, because it's lovely to be able to savor it all by itself!

[icarusancalion.livejournal.com]

*Icarus snickers.*

I was really skimming that R-rating as it was, and was amazed the 'Midnight' and 'The Book of Eros' chapters made it past the censors with only minimal changes.

If I ever post 'Primer to the Dark Arts' at RS.org (the restricted section), I'll submit it with this and one other scene, plus remove the slight changes which were just a word here and there, that were made to 'Midnight' (Harry/Snape's first night) and 'The Book of Eros' (Harry/Ron's first time).

But first I have to finish 'Beg Me For It.' ;)

Icarus

[(Anonymous)]

i am so turned on right now it's not even funny... damn sexual frustration...i worship you..

-harvey

[switchknife.livejournal.com]

OHMYGOD. THIS IS WHY I LOVE YOU. LANGUID LOVEMAKING IN THE MORNING AND HARRY GIGGLES AND THE FINE SHEET OF HAIR AND... GUH. All this affection and familiarity and ah!

I envy, I envy you like I can't believe. (Well. I can. It's with good reason, after all!)

You just took me into that shower--Severus's hair, the texture, and I know what that feels like, long black hair, smoothed and wet like silk. Oh my God. Just transposing that onto Severus nearly made me melt into a puddle of whimpering goo.

I love this. Write more smut, please. Yesplzdo.

[venivincere]

with a shiver Harry welcomed him, easily. His legs scissored over Severus' back, casual, relaxed…
Oh, I can just see how comfortable they are in loving each other...that's the most convincing, sweet little image! Wow!

[ptyx.livejournal.com]

Beautiful.

[noirenails.livejournal.com]

Awwies. A bit late comment, I know, but as if that was going to stop me...
Love the drabble, it's so sweet and warm. Among all those angsty post-OotP fics people need fluff like this. Love and marshmallows.

[raveninthewind.livejournal.com]

This is too meaty to call a drabble (although I know that's waht it is). I like the emotions here. Two lovers, very familiar with each other and still there's a zing in their relationship at the end. Yum.

[icarusancalion.livejournal.com]

Thank you.

I assume you've read Primer to the Dark Arts, and know where this is from? It's been added into the NC-17 version that's going up now on http://www.restrictedsection.org/.

Icarus

[raveninthewind.livejournal.com]

I've read Primer from your site. Is the version there NC-17? Hmm. Maybe I need to reread it anyway. :D

[icarusancalion.livejournal.com]

The version at the restricted section only has a few changes that make it NC-17. The original on Schnoogle pushes the R about as far as it can go, actually. I had a lot of help from one of the mods -- CLS who beta'd it -- on determining just where the line is. Someplace like the Sugar Quill would call that version NC-17. It depends on how you define the rating -- by visual cinematic description (like Fiction Alley) or by subject matter (like the Sugar Quill).

Icarus

[ansku]

That was a sweet little cut-scene :) I could easily read more of this...

[icarusancalion.livejournal.com]

You know, I eventually did put it in. The version RS.org (special edition) has this scene.

Icarus