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Woo. These two are an intense combination, arent they? Thank you to [livejournal.com profile] auxphono for the request. Consider this my welcome-back present. You were missed.



More Than One Way To Win
by Icarus


"There are more ways than one to win you, Harry."

Tom somehow managed to look cool and elegant as he kneeled at his feet, his head dipped and the zipper slowly pulled…

Stop! Harry woke, sat up straight in bed, panting and sweaty. The button to his pyjamas was open.

"There are more ways than one to win, Harry."

His skin was so smooth, so soft against Harry's cheek. Harry slowly tasted the dewy firm curve of his stomach, shaped the hollow dip in the center. The hand on his head guided him inexorably down…

No, Harry whispered. Stop. And he woke, dizzy and frightened. Unsurprised that his pyjama top was gone.

Tom was spread on his hands and knees. Bars held him, ankle to ankle, wrist to wrist. He could neither open his legs further nor close them.

This wasn't so bad. This was okay. With the whip in his hand, he struck. And struck again.

"You're hurting me, Harry." Tom said it in a mild, unconcerned voice.

Shocked, Harry stopped.

Tom glanced back at him, his eyes unreadable. "Now who do you think is in control?"



Finis.


Eleven down, eight more to go:

More Than One Way To Win - Tom/Harry for [livejournal.com profile] auxphono
Weasleys Come in Twos and Threes Fred/Harry/George for [livejournal.com profile] lyricalnights
Deep Throat Percy/Severus for [livejournal.com profile] chaos_rose
A '57 Vincent And A Red-Headed Boy - Ron/Sirus for [livejournal.com profile] wanderingscribe
It Was All Right Harry/Ron for [livejournal.com profile] ragnhildholm
Safeword Percy/Severus [livejournal.com profile] wired_lizard
Rat For Dessert Peter/Severus for [livejournal.com profile] _greenie_
Christmas Fluff Percy/Harry for [livejournal.com profile] haku_kaen
Not My Affair VIII: Steam Ron/Percy (muse got really out of control)
Not My Affair VII: A Toast To Misery Ron/Percy (muse got out of control)
Not My Affair VI: A Year Later Ron/Percy for [livejournal.com profile] isolde9 (follow up to Not My Affair 1-5)
In November Neville/Ron for [livejournal.com profile] ursule
A Little Night Music Hermion/Rita for [livejournal.com profile] mark356

More coming!

Fred/George NC-17 for [livejournal.com profile] ygrane
Ron/Draco for [livejournal.com profile] thywillbedone
Harry/Snape (Snape Manor - I may make this a Primer missing scene to avoid spoilers) for [livejournal.com profile] barbana
Hermione/McGonagall (optional) for [livejournal.com profile] puella_deville
Harry/Cedric for [livejournal.com profile] blithesea
Harry/Snape (Harry dominant, NC-17) for [livejournal.com profile] vileseagulls
Percy/Draco, Beg Me For It universe for [livejournal.com profile] tboy
Severus/Harry, with extra snark [livejournal.com profile] bluemoon02

Date: 2003-09-22 11:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] puella-deville.livejournal.com
Whee! Go you with the examination of dom/sub manipulation! Would comment more, but off to read the others....

Date: 2003-09-23 09:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
[livejournal.com profile] wired_lizard's story request put me in the mood. I think she'd like this one better.

Icarus

Date: 2003-09-23 01:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] helenwalter.livejournal.com
You HAVE been busy, haven't you? yay yay yay, more reading for me to do!!!!

Date: 2003-09-23 09:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
Yeah. Wow. I wanted to finish one project before I started the next, you know? Something about writing these is helping me knuckle down and focus... though, truth be told, when I put out the invitation for drabbles, I expected, oh, seven or so? Not twenty. *Icarus looks slightly bug-eyed.*

Now that I've got them down to the seven or so left to so it seems more manageable. I always appreciated the drabble/story Cybele wrote for me, so I really want to do everyone's request.

Icarus

Date: 2003-09-23 10:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] guntar.livejournal.com
Ohhh, this is very well done. Very creepy. I love how absolutely condensed this is, the images coming on sudden, and strong. We're jolted from one disjointed image to the next with little to bring them into a cohesive whole except the further removal of Harry's pjyamas, the constant presence of Tom, and the repition of Tom's statement that "There are more ways than one to win, Harry." Then the near-reptition of "This wasn't so bad. This was okay," calms the reader perfectly so that the last line hits with extra force.

Great Work.

*Unintelligible Squeeing*

Date: 2003-09-23 02:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] auxphono.livejournal.com
Gah.

Well that certainly screwed with my mind.... o_0* (which means that I absolutely adored it). Pardon me for sounding like a 14 year old fangirl but... XD that was so cool.

The reality switching was something I didn't expect, and it totally made the drabble. The fact that it was really concise and didn't try to go over the top with details gave it really nice pacing. I'm usually one for being long-winded in drabbles, so it's nice for me to read something so well organized and.. well, to use a phrase used occasionally to describe tasty guitar solos - you breathed wonderfully in that last number.

^_^ thank you icarus! (I'm going to go catch up on the other drabbles I missed... they look so good!)

Date: 2003-09-23 04:31 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
*shudders* whooa.. talk about fraternizing with the enemy...nice one..i like the ones where the one who thinks their in charge, usually isn't..

-harvey

Reminds me of...

Date: 2003-09-23 06:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] switchknife.livejournal.com

One of those strange dream sequences, when you know you shouldn't be doing what you're doing, but freed of those peculiar boundaries of daytime life, you end up doing what you shouldn't.

Oh my. I must try to forget some of the bad, bad things I've done in my dreams.

Date: 2004-01-15 12:26 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Hey, you know every link on your fanfiction page cames to this story? not that its not great and all but I was looking for Ron/Draco... incidentally, how is Beg Me For It coming anyway? ;)

Date: 2004-01-15 12:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
Hi. It works for Microsoft Explorer. What browser are you using?

Icarus

Date: 2004-01-22 08:57 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
I'm having the same problem. I use netscape 7. Its not actually all of them - only the ones down from the proper link for this one.

Just tried using explorer instead - that works

Date: 2004-01-22 09:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
Explorers displays a little weird, too. I'll have a look at it. Hmm. My lack of expertise with HTML is showing.

Icarus

Date: 2004-01-22 08:58 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
I'm having the same problem. I use netscape 7. Its not actually all of them - only the ones down from the proper link for this one.

Just tried using explorer instead - that works.

Excellent fic BTW - even thought I had to read 3 times before I worked out what happening. All of your fics are excellent.

Date: 2004-01-24 07:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
Thank you!

I went through my site, and I hope I've fixed the problem. Er. I hope.

Icarus

Date: 2004-03-26 02:13 am (UTC)
ext_7889: (Default)
From: [identity profile] helkamaria.livejournal.com
Hi, I have the same problem. I use Mozilla, and I was trying to get to 'Beg Me For It', since I'm trying to compile a list of HP classics (http://www.livejournal.com/users/furina/10409.html) and someone suggested 'Beg Me For It'.

Date: 2004-03-26 02:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icarusancalion.livejournal.com
Cool! I love your list!

And - argh - about those links on my site. I don't know what to do, it might be the program I'm using. But there weren't any problems before. *tears hair out* Well, all three parts of Beg Me For It can be found at http://www.restrictedsection.org (Beg Me For It - Sex, Drugs and Death Eater Rock - Hey You).

Let's see... you need some rareslash Links for sure.

Icarus

Date: 2004-03-26 03:06 pm (UTC)
ext_7889: (Default)
From: [identity profile] helkamaria.livejournal.com
Thanks for the link, I'll be adding it in addition to the to your homepage. I'm no expert with HTML either, but I just thought that if you are using an automatic code generator like FrontPage you might want to look at the code. I've heard the code those programs produce may be somewhat crappy. I briefly studied Computer Science and the teacher told us that it's best to clean the code manually. I never used a code generator so I don't know for sure what the code is like.

Let's see... you need some rareslash Links for sure.

Ooh yes, more links! Yay!

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