Going over the wall on Out Of Bounds.

[icarus]

Here goes.

Going over the wall. I'm going to write one of the three toughest scenes in Out Of Bounds.

Wish me luck.


ETA: Okay, very rough first draft of it done. One iffy transition and a section that needs to be fleshed out, but whew. The hard part's done.

ETA2: Or maybe not.

Comments

[malnpudl.livejournal.com]

*cheerleads*

*\o/*

[icarusancalion.livejournal.com]

Thank you. First sketch done. Now I have to finish the later parts of the skate and polish it up.

*gasp, gasp*

[rike-tikki-tavi.livejournal.com]

crossing all my fingers

[icarusancalion.livejournal.com]

First "roughing in" of the scene done. Now to go in and flesh out the weak spots.

[venivincere]

You can do it! Good luck! :-)

[icarusancalion.livejournal.com]

Thank you. *pant, pant, pant* Now I just need to go in and fix that rough transition and flesh out that very sketchy part of the skating.

[bramble-rose.livejournal.com]

*waves pompoms*
!!Good Luck!!

[icarusancalion.livejournal.com]

Okay, first very rough draft done, with lots of holes and need for cleaning up and a rough transition and that paragraph of description that I just breezed over with a sentence and--*pant, pant*

Wow. Okay. When I finish this scene I'll have about 25 pages almost ready to post.

[seekergeek.livejournal.com]

*does double back flip and ends in the splits* Go you! *\o/*

[icarusancalion.livejournal.com]

That's some impressive cheerleading, thank you. *the crowds roar*

It didn't go as well as I'd hoped, but here's to "well, at least it's progress." *clinks beer steins*

In the meantime, I'm going to go ahead and post: the next part is here (http://icarusancalion.livejournal.com/798394.html).

[rabidfan.livejournal.com]

::cheering you on from the sideline::

[icarusancalion.livejournal.com]

Thank you. *tweaks the adorable munchkin*

[rabidfan.livejournal.com]

Well, she is awefully cute...

She's becoming a monster. I've always thought "time out" was dumb. Now? I'm going out tomorrow to buy a small chair to plant her stubborn little butt in for minutes at a time. I hope it works or by the time she's a teenager the neighbors will be calling the cops!