Another original story, this one set in the real world.

[icarus]

Here you go. This is what almost made my entire portfolio late.

She Was Right, PG-13. A happy relationship gets an early morning surprise. Some of you might recognise this.

Comments

[tartanshell.livejournal.com]

Wow. I liked the other one (but have to wait until I'm more awake to properly review), but this was incredible. I guess I never understood what people meant when they said "write what you know" until now.

You should get this published.

[icarusancalion.livejournal.com]

Wow. Really?

Wow.

Thank you, so much, for letting me know. I was really worried about this one. I am so grateful to you and Barbana for getting back to me on this. Obviously, I've done a lot of fanfiction, but I haven't been sure I could carry my own characters and original stories.

So there's hope, eh?

Wow.

Icarus

[laurelwood.livejournal.com]

I do recognize bits of this from posts; what a compelling story it makes. God, my heart started to race when I got to the part where you're looking around the apartment, doing the "what's mine, what's his, what stays, what goes" cataloguing of possessions. A bit of "Been there, done that" for me, and you captured the feeling of it perfectly.