Do you want a commentary?

[icarus]

Well I've been watching these commentaries with interest, and really enjoyed them. Do you want a commentary on any of my fics (if I didn't list the one you were interested, just drop it in comments... mctabby, you know the story and the main, her, thrust behind, Ron/Teaspoon. ;)

[Poll #241029]

Comments

[mark356.livejournal.com]

Skinny Dipping is a story I keep recommending to people who want porn, Harry porn, Percy porn, porn that proves how sweet porn can be, or just hot boysmut in general, and I would love to see your line-by-line comments on it.

Both Zen Taxi and Guy Talk had a lot of little details and amusing lines that I wasn't getting because they were so clearly part of the fic; seeing your comments on either of these would be seeing the workings of a maestra.

And of course I voted for An Irresistible Photo, because your Harry, Ron, and photographs are an irresistible combination!

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[icarusancalion.livejournal.com]

I was hoping someone would select Skinny Dipping, actually. There's a story behind that one.

An Irresistible Photo was actually the first HP story I wrote.

Icarus