Harry/Ron rec
May. 6th, 2003 06:50 pmMoving Pictures
The rare well-written Harry/Ron! Not only that, it looks like it's going to be novel-length. Even better: they're both beautifully in character, the magical details at the Burrow are rich and well-visualised... and just Anna's writing style is treat, both vivid and funny. And she captures both Ron and Harry's voice very well.
"The sunset continued to blaze away in a glorious tangle of Gryffindor red-and-gold, but it was wasting its crayons. They weren't watching anymore."
From Ron's POV:
"And Ron had felt a stab of raw power shoot through him, powerful enough to make him shudder: he's as lost in you as you are in him. Figure that one out, will you?
What might have happened next had his blood hula-dancing with expectancy."
I'm going to be watching this one.
The rare well-written Harry/Ron! Not only that, it looks like it's going to be novel-length. Even better: they're both beautifully in character, the magical details at the Burrow are rich and well-visualised... and just Anna's writing style is treat, both vivid and funny. And she captures both Ron and Harry's voice very well.
"The sunset continued to blaze away in a glorious tangle of Gryffindor red-and-gold, but it was wasting its crayons. They weren't watching anymore."
From Ron's POV:
"And Ron had felt a stab of raw power shoot through him, powerful enough to make him shudder: he's as lost in you as you are in him. Figure that one out, will you?
What might have happened next had his blood hula-dancing with expectancy."
I'm going to be watching this one.
Re: Updates
Date: 2003-05-07 03:25 pm (UTC)I'm not as happy with "Circles" as I was with "The Lodger". It's my first HP fic, took forever to write and right from the start wasn't very structured. I love the individual parts, but the thing as a whole is a bit top-heavy ... I'm posting it anyway but hopefully I've learned something from the experience.
I'm delighted you liked "The Lodger", though! And I *am* answering your e-mail - I'm having one of those weeks, but it'll be with you ASAP.
Mad Martha