Sent new version of that OOB scene to the betas.

[icarus]

The section I planned to post on Out Of Bounds was supposed to be longer but one scene isn't working out.

Just sent a complete re-write to my betas. I'm not happy with it at all. In fact, I'm less happy with it than I was before. May have to reorder some scenes as well.

The good news is that two (far, far in the distant future) scenes did come out well. Those are beta'd and ready, parked in the driveway with their engines humming. Of roughly 25 scenes for the summer, 12 are written and ready to go.

Just held up by the other scenes strung between them.

Comments

[rabidfan.livejournal.com]

Yummy.

You could put it in the section where John is in his cast and acting a bit feral in bed??? It's too hot to not use.

[icarusancalion.livejournal.com]

Oh, ha, now it's my turn to get lost in my outline. Which scene was that?