My most consistently flamed story

[icarus]

I don't often get flames, concrit yes, but not flames. Yet somehow, for some reason this drabble consistently inspires them:


In November
by Icarus


His lips were soft, which was unexpected. Ron looked like he was all skinny angles, but he was soft really. His eyelashes fluttered closed, his breath a warm pant on Neville's cheek, a November mist.

They had just been talking, that's all, about Quidditch and family and girls and things like that, when it got really, really quiet.

Neville breathed a sigh, and took in the arching branches overhead, the quiet lake, the patch of sky.

"We probably shouldn't do that again."

They both agreed, as they leaned in for a second kiss.

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Mystified?

Me too.

Comments

[ursulakohl.livejournal.com]

Yeah, I don't get a lot of flames, but I've had more complaints about plausibility for Hermione/ Twins than anything else . . .

[icarusancalion.livejournal.com]

Oh, once again I'm not getting comments.

Hermione/Twins? But that's my favourite of yours (Well. Besides that simmering Percy/Snape).

Icarus

[ursulakohl.livejournal.com]

But, see, if you get good grades that means you're super-innocent and moralistic and wouldn't kiss a guy unless he proposed first ;)

[icarusancalion.livejournal.com]

Ooooooh. I'm glad they've cleared that up. So I guess that Dominitrix!Hermione/Sub!Ron I put in for the Blame Somebody Else challenge a while ago is completely out of the question....

Icarus

[ursulakohl.livejournal.com]

Oh, Hermione and Ron can do anything, but they have to get married, first ;)

[icarusancalion.livejournal.com]

What if I threw in Snape?

Icarus

[ursulakohl.livejournal.com]

That would be adultery. Unless Hermione gets to watch.